:D

leaves me wondering, but still an amazing piece with your unmistakable touch. i love sappy little don-and-charlie-always-being-there-for-each-other fics. =]

you've been given a year
time to add more darling
:)
have fun

great fic!:) really well writen - but may i ask, what other fic of yours is it based on? i looked through your stories and there was nothing there that could have possibly come before this one...

anyways, back to the point: love your writing style, and the way you've applied it to this one-shot - keep up the great work!:):)

Nice , I like alot. Do you think you could add more to the story?

This is a really cool fic! One of my faves. But I have a request - could you write a companion piece? That describes how Don ended up in hospital? cause I'd really like to know what happened! and why was Charlie mad? Please think about it!

Pretty please! ;)

Aww, sweet. Short, but really it's enough. The two
brothers are so devoted to each other, once a promise
is made it's binding. Don WILL get well.

Well done. Short stories are difficult. To wrap up
a complete story in a few words is hard to do. My
compliments!

Nicely done. I really like how you put the whole situation down and made it interesting.

This is such an evocative piece. I love the relationship between the brothers- Charlie calling Don back, Don's instinctive response. Good call; it works well in the Numb3rs universe. I'll add here that I'd really like to see part 4 of the original (please?) Part 3's such a cliffhanger! :D

Great story! It's a wonderful scene and I'd love to see you expand on it even more.

You've got to continue this... this is just amazing. I wanna know what happened/happens

Aw! Please add the rest!! I'm a big fan of Don H/C, and I have to know more!

I love it! I would love if there where more to this in the future. Please add more.