A youngster of your years SHOULD NOT write SLASH!

It's a minor error in your story, unless he comes up in other chapters, but Apollo is NOT the Greek god of war; Aries is; Apollo is the god of the sun, inventor of the lure (the musical instrument which led to harps), was the inspiration of poets, and is also associated with Delphi where the oracles were.
I am a little confused - what drove Sam mad?

/sniffles/

Cool

okay okay, bit confusing at first but i think i got there in the end... lol hurts my head thinking about an alternate reality!

Finally! you updated! Thank GOD!! Great Chap! More to come? There better be!

MORE CHAPS! I love where this story is going and i have to say Poor Carter!

Interesting... please update soon.

Can't wait to see where you go with this!