Marner 2007-12-20 . chapter 5Aghh, I must know what happens! Continue! ^_^ |
angelofire 2005-08-29 . chapter 4update soon |
Paty Cake 2005-08-24 . chapter 3 The translation as whispered in my ear by Candy: ‘You were supposed to give him pink! Not purple! Pink is the color he dislikes the most!’
That made me laugh so much! Continue! |
angelofire 2005-08-24 . chapter 3update soon |
the pack 2005-08-24 . chapter 2 Lindsey: I'll be reading as long as the story turns out how you explained it to me. lol. When do they meet Morious? I'm curious about his character...
Jackie: Morious. Interesting name. I can't say if I like Candy or not yet. There is not much to judge her by, but she seems like quite a daring little figure. Nicholas is more like her intelligent best friend that no one listens to . This is quite a change of scenery from 'I'll be missing you' in fiction press... how did you go from a romantic and sad tale of faith to a comedy?
Rose: ((Currently not available to give a review))
Jay: I'll be able to give a review when I see Sherlock and Watson come into this. That's where I'll be reviewing the most--you must stay within their characters. Be careful with Wonka's character. And I understand about Channel not being a Mary Sue, but you must keep some general traits or else she is a completely new character...
Rene: HEY! New member to the pack! Pleasure to meet ya! Can't review your work yet 'cause I haven't read any other thing you've written. I'll be reading the first story and then move to the sequel :) :) |
angelofire 2005-08-22 . chapter 2update soon and i was just wondering how old is Candy in this story? |
angelofire 2005-08-22 . chapter 1i like it so far can't wait for the next chapter |