This is very good, but the repetitiveness of identifying them as "short-hair" and "black-eye" is a bit annoying. I'm guessing it's Vincent and Hojo, referring to Lucrecia at the end. Very good!

Read this one before, neglected to review then, but finally getting around to it now. Very good, I like the fact that they're friends in this, the dialogue is excellent.

*hums thoughtfully* I wanna say Vince to the short haired one. And the other is either a weird conglomorate of various people or one of your OCs, who I can't for the life of me recall because it's been so long since I read Bound and I'm in an FF7 lull anyways.

Nicely done all the same.

I have never read Vinnie and Hojo written in such a way, at least that's who it made me think of.

very good fic

~Sabith

Hojo and Vicne right? 30 odd years before to game. Poor Vince, so many sins so few ways to atone for them...
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Vincent and Hojo, and referring to Lucrecia at the end, right? I like how you worked details about their appearances into the scene to clue the reader in on who is speaking, without using their names.

If I do have the characters' identities right, the idea that they could have been friends in the past has given me something to think about. Great scene!

Hm that's odd... I wondered if it's Hojo and Tseng, but Tseng and Vincent both have long hair... *confused*

Vincent and Hojo, right? And "she" is Lucrecia? I like how it was vague. Makes you take in the details because you cannot recognize them from the onset.

Oh man, was that Hojo and Vincent actually being friendly with each other? very interesting, good job, hope you write more fics, baibai!

I like that you didn't say their names. I like that writing device for some reason. Heheheh. But yeah, this is good. It's rough being a Turk, I guess. Just think, they could've been mechanics. :)

Hmm, tricky. I'd say the one working in Mako Sciences is Hojo, and the other person is, Vincent? But that suggests he's talking about Lucrecia, and I don't know how that'd work out seeing as how he's speaking to Hojo. I don't know, blah.

Either way, very well written! Loved it.

Hojo, Vincent, with a mention of Lucrecia. Well, that's my guess.

Good little tale, I want to give Vin a hug.

Hm. Very interesting. X'D I think...it's either Zack and Hojo, or Tseng and Hojo. The latter's probably more plausible--they were speaking rather like friends, weren't they?

I have a feeling my guess is far from right. O__o