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uchiha miyo 2008-03-25 . chapter 1
its really good make another chapter please i need more its so good
Namine1993 2008-02-28 . chapter 1
excellent! very good story! *O*
I´ve always prefer the itasaku
but this story is so good *O*
please continue soon *O*
good luck and cheer up;)!
TeenageCrisis 2007-12-20 . chapter 1
i was wondering if you plan to continure this sometime?
Kittyluv48 2007-04-29 . chapter 1
hey r u every gonna update this?

itz really good

TTYL
Skullcandy 2007-02-10 . chapter 1
I like your story a lot! Update soon!! But maybe seperate your sentences up a bit more...
Dreaming Sky 2007-01-22 . chapter 1
hgfxdhds
Moon Kit Fox 2007-01-21 . chapter 1
Nice job. I like it. Good luck writing the rest of it.
brittany 2007-01-07 . chapter 1
HOW CAN YOU LEAVE IT AT THAT WITHOUT ANOTHER CHAPTER. And I could make this a lot harsher, but you asked nicely. Please write another chapter soon.
moonlit mage 2006-10-08 . chapter 1
The idea rocks, your work rocks, but Deidara and Itachi are...really OOC. I won't make this too harsh, but there are a few things that make me iffy: Orochimaru has a capable med-nin in Kabuto, while Sakura does have tremendous prospect at surpassing the Godaime, it's unlikely Orochimaru would place a Cursed seal on her, unless planning on using her as a future host. Secondly, if you could, Deidara as a certain way of speaking, as I'm sure you know, so try to incorperate that as well. Thirdly, Itachi...he wouldn't lose his temper so quickly, and Deidara wouldn't be foolish enough to provoke him so. Akatsuki members, though they may not particularly like their partners or other members, would treat higher ups with a little more respect.

Though the story is really good, and I look forward to the next chapter, I'd like to see Deidara a little more in character ^^;, as he's the one most OOC.
cast14 2006-08-20 . chapter 1
i hope you update soon its a great story and very interesting
Kane-Laura591 2006-08-01 . chapter 1
YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER XD I LOVE THIS STORY WOW DEIDRA O_O take good care i'll wait patiently
Siy 2006-07-14 . chapter 1
I wonder when you will update, I got hooked already by your fic xD
I don't have a name 2006-04-30 . chapter 1
UPDATE GIRL!
ODST girl058 2006-04-09 . chapter 1
This is cool, different from the rest and a good Sakura Itachi fic! Update again soon! Semper fi
crimson-asylum 2006-01-26 . chapter 1
good, update soon.
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