 master of toast 2008-04-16 . chapter 1OMG I love this I read it every day. no joke. this is amazing ^^ |
 OkashiraShinomori 2005-10-18 . chapter 1I really liked this fic! It's good to see more Takagi/Satou in here. I felt SO bad for him when he saw Shiratori with the ring...((Shudders.)) Poor guy. Addin' ya to favorites for sure! |
 Chou Nuriko 2005-10-18 . chapter 1Nice fic. Except the fact that Shiratori's only an inspecter instead of a superintendent. Next time maybe you can also throw in Chiba or Yumi or even Ran, who're all avid Takagi/Satou supporter in the series. And I hope you won't mind me putting your fic into my Metro Police C2 Community. ^^ |
 YumeTakato 2005-09-10 . chapter 1XD Loved the Omake... and.. Shiratori is just.. a freak.
-shudders- and to think KAitou KID had to impersonate him for practically a *whole* movie... blah...
At least he got a more normal, suavy character for the 8th movie =.= he didn't have to be a *freak* then... -flops- |
 RanMouri82 2005-08-22 . chapter 1Thank you SO MUCH for writing a Takagi/Satou fic! As such, this brief story stands out in the DC category as a rare gem.
A couple of practical comments might be to watch for spelling errors and to take care when describing sound effects. For a second, I thought Takagi or Shiratori slapped each other! But the mini-epilogue was adorable; Satou would make reparation for her lost lunch top priority!
Again, fantastic job. Keep writing! |
 Fyliwion 2005-08-22 . chapter 1Kawaii ^^ Very very nice ^^ Great Takagi/Satou.. and the omake just makes it all better *giggles* Wonderful! |