Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: Storm on the Horizon - Reviews: Page 1 of 15

101spacemonkey
2008-07-03
ch 23,
abusei like that summary

i cant beleive sara, i would love to see how gregs relationships developed with the team over the coming month, as the ending was fabulous, but felt a little rushed. it filled my heart with pride rather than heart ache!
101spacemonkey
2008-07-03
ch 22,
abuseyou arent going to be really evil and have bad results come from the tests are you? that would be more heart break i think i could bear...

loved this chapter, it was interesting that greg saw grissom as paul... im a little intrigued at the fact that he didnt flinch from the teams touch, but i cant wait to see what happens when nick turns up at the door
101spacemonkey
2008-07-03
ch 21,
abusethat is an evil cliffie, however i think its great that the button to my right will take me to the next chapter!

you knwo, it was looking a little worrying there for a bit
101spacemonkey
2008-07-03
ch 20,
abusethey wouldnt just leave him, mind you what with imminent danger to themselves... i know all about checking for signs of danger before going in to help, i sort of do it as a living (sort of)

and to be so close and yet so far, then again didnt warrick find keys in pauls car?
101spacemonkey
2008-07-03
ch 19,
abusethe twists were fabulous, jack is louises sister and the lover of paul, the man accused of her rape... complicated triangle that

i hope they find greg, i really do, i cant stand death fics, well i can i just dont like them...
101spacemonkey
2008-07-03
ch 18,
abusea clue!

go catherine, they are bound to find greg alive and kicking now!
101spacemonkey
2008-07-03
ch 17,
abusepaul just shot himself didnt he?

why is paul so angry at greg and nick, what did greg do to him?

maybe he is just angry about gregs life, and all that jazz and is twisting the reality of it all, but what did nick do? maybe i missed something...
101spacemonkey
2008-07-03
ch 16,
abusei wonder were greg is, i knwo whereever he is, he is in iminent danger, and as such all the evidence will be washed away!

at least the nurse realised there was something wrong!
101spacemonkey
2008-07-03
ch 15,
abuseno... the lab tech? eek ouch and hang on a minute! i feel like i missed something, i could have sworn that paul felt bad about shooting him, but then again, he may have felt bad as he was the accomplice...
101spacemonkey
2008-07-03
ch 14,
abuseas soon as paul mentioned csi i could see were that was going! but im sure nick will get out of it in one piece, but what about the others? didnt catherine enter the cabin as well?

and there was me hoping they could gather up evidence...

the camera was a nice twist, it did have me thinking for a second that paul may have left a film of what he had done to greg for the team to find, so that he could taunt them further
101spacemonkey
2008-07-03
ch 13,
abusei am so happy greg fought! and the wee scene were he reflected on the team, and how he wanted to be a part of it was heart breaking! the team will follow nicks lead, but get there too late! and they will find evidence which will tell them all about gregs ordeal so far! and then there will have to be there reaction, which im sure will be equally heart breaking
101spacemonkey
2008-07-03
ch 12,
abusei bet greg tastes good!

it was nice to see gris loose his composure, and im really happy that nick rushed in at the end, and seems to have a lead!

paul was lying, he has hurt my greg, in more ways than one! grr
101spacemonkey
2008-07-03
ch 11,
abuseyou could do a one off chapter in which we see the full extent of gregs ordeal.. then again innuendo works just as well.

You certainly won’t live to see tomorrow - the team had better hurry up!
101spacemonkey
2008-07-03
ch 10,
abuseeek, he has an accomplice, i wonder if the accomplice is someone who hates greg, or maybe hates grissom, i swear if you do any more twists and turns my heart will leap out of my chest!
101spacemonkey
2008-07-03
ch 9,
abuseI think he’s sexually attracted to Greg - now really? who isnt?

and as long as he stayed that way, they were going to do their damn best to find him -what? if he dies they will stop looking for him?

i love the angst, and i can almost hear the stress in gil's voice!
Return to Top