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Grand Puba of All The Smurf...
2008-02-01
ch 23,
abuseGasp! What an ending! PLEASE continue!
GregsLabrat
2007-03-09
ch 23,
abuseI really LOVED the story and the sequel sounds interesting. O course, maybe you already posted it...but I hope there is a sequel cuz this was an amazing story! Great work!
PisceanPal23
2006-12-14
ch 23,
abuse:O Omg...omg...that was so fricken AMAZING! This is definately one of the most AMAZING SUPREME stories EVER IN HISTORY! Be proud of this story, you deserve it...I loved it, I cannot express how much I love this story
Dybdahl
2006-08-02
ch 1,
abuseNot to be evil, but why does there have to be a connection between two doule homicides happening in one night? Does Catherin have a 6th sense about these things?
lil'spencefan
2006-06-23
ch 23,
abuseThat was an excellent story! I'm from the U.S., so I didn't exactly what some words meant (such as torch; is a torch a flashlight?) Anyway, you portrayed every characters' emotions flawlessly, and i must congradulate you on a job well done. however, you lacked some puncuation marks, but
you made up for these errors with a highly sophisticated and well thought out story line. Keep writing cause I really want to read more of
your stories, especially ones with angst and
Greg! Overall verdict-I LOVED IT!
princessako
2006-06-22
ch 1,
abusei liked your story a lot. i am an old reviewer with a new pen name.
Down Play To Murder
2006-05-13
ch 6,
abuseIt's getting good, I'll finish reading the rest later.
Missing Fairy
2006-04-08
ch 23,
abuseWow! This is one great story! You've captured the characters really well and the plot is captivating!
Really well written!
Please keep up the great work- a sequel WOULD be nice!

Once again, great job!
Kazan28
2006-02-05
ch 23,
abuseI LOVED this story! It was so amazing. You're a really great author! I love the idea of a sequal. I think you should go with it! and soon!
karmine
2006-01-13
ch 23,
abuseplz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz
plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz

make another chapter i want to know if he can handle being a csi or not plz plz plz make another one

great chapters!
Eshlyn Kar
2005-12-04
ch 23,
abuseI think you should give the poor guy a break, he just went through hell. I think that Paul should have a younger brother/sister who is raped and low and behold Greg is put on the case and Greg has to help that person overcome the trauma, while dealing with the emotional trauma of helping Paul's own flesh and blood. That is what I would like to read.
Elyse Rozema
Buddieboy
2005-12-03
ch 23,
abuseDo you continue? Hell yes!
SAM 008
2005-11-18
ch 23,
abuseO... Interesting I'm looking forward to it! that and... YAY!
kittyluv
2005-11-13
ch 23,
abuseLOVE THE STORY AND LOVE THE NEW IDEA! WRITE IT WRITE IT WRITE IT!...Please?
angw
2005-11-09
ch 23,
abuseYou have to continue...please :D
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