OH BWOY! This is great adventure. Xander, always loved that lad.. the way you got him.. far out. Wha'ts gonna happen next? And Willow, she's wonderfully written, love the part with her at the bronze.. Spikes promise to get the Slayer. Oooo, is that Kendra? Or Buffy? I hope it's Kendra, that'll be a hoot to see them all face off. -drools- More!More!More! (Ain't too proud ta beg here... -g-)

Yesssss! Kendra and Spike facing off? Oh, baby yeh! Love those two mixing it up. Romantic, maybe? The story has an interesting twist to it. The ending was a surprise! I liked the way you draw us in, and hunger for Kendras entrance. Bring it on.. more please.

What the? Very weird story. Hard to follow so far. Doesn't really follow the timeline. I really want to find out what happened to Xander. Perhaps a flashback in his perspective? It's good, just a lot to be explained. Any chance of Xander/Dru?. Keep it up.

Okay...that was interesting, but really hard to follow especially at the end.