 xblissfuloblivion 2007-10-23 . chapter 14Oh! Please! You're killing me here! ;) Update, update, UPDATE soon! PLEASE! |
 lillianne 2007-07-31 . chapter 14You are absolutely positively my favourite fan-fic writer!
Your fic is actually the long awaited worth it wait! Does that make sense?
I love your characterisations, descriptions & handling of the mundane day-to-day realities of parenthood as well as those special events like Chistmas. A wonderful compromise between fantasy & reality. It is also beyond wonderful to get some background on Ray, coz Lord knows the ER writers haven't made that a high priority.
I predict a very pivotal moment soon! I am sure you will as always not disappoint but deliver! |
 black 2007-07-01 . chapter 14 More more more! |
 axd3258 2007-05-30 . chapter 13i really love this story.
i hope you update really soon!
i just cant wait anymore to find out what happens next! hurry! :) |
 ipsilon 2007-05-29 . chapter 9I'm just having a re-read of some 'classic' Reela fics. This one is particularly ace. More Ray and Neela please. |
 cerys 2007-05-29 . chapter 1 I love this fic. However: I do feel like Jenny might be kind of a little, (I don't mean to be harsh) Mary Sue-ish, though. A very, very well written one, but all the same. I wouldn't mention it but I kind of feel like it might a little bit be affecting the rest of the fic- with every new chapter I feel like the original Ray-Neela storyline which you set out with is pushed to the side. Obviously its your fic and if you're having fun writing that character then go ahead- but the rest of the storyline is kind of losing shape under it. Maybe have another spin-off in which the Jenny/Brett thing is more part of the storyline from the beginning, that way you can do the whole thing justice? People really seem to like the pairing so it could be a success.
Just to round off I must stress that I do really love this fic otherwise, and I wouldn't say any of these things if I didn't think you were good enough of a writer to take it in your stride. |
 espergirl04 2007-05-27 . chapter 14I seriously love this fic, please update soon =) |
 axd3258 2007-05-10 . chapter 14love it!
please update soon!
:) |
 YOUPIN 2007-04-30 . chapter 14amazing job |
 Bella79 2007-04-30 . chapter 14And she's back! Awesome Fi and so worth the wait :) I loved this chapter, all of it Bret/Jenny and Neela/Ray having the talk! Cant wait for more :D |
 New Year's Baby 2007-04-15 . chapter 13Can't remember if I already submitted a review, but if not, just wanted to let you know that this is great story. It has me hooked! I hope you update it sometime soon -- would love to read more. |
 Henia1977 2007-03-29 . chapter 13yes update soon |
 xblissfuloblivion 2007-03-20 . chapter 13I love this story!!
It's one of my favourites!!
Please I hope you update it soon!! |
 Amythest Girl 2007-02-11 . chapter 13I Love This Story!
It took me till half way throught the first chapter to realise it was the sequel to a story i've already read,lol.
Please continue this story!
I'm enjoying this very much, the conflict between Ray and Neela is different and sometimes that's just what you need, difference.
Update Soon,
Amythest Girl. |
 dreamallday 2006-10-24 . chapter 11 I liked this fic, and then you disappeared and stopped updating. Will you ever finish it? |