ElleyPerry 2008-10-18 . chapter 47I've just finished reading all your stories! They are awesome. Are you ever going to write anymore Harry Potter? You should write one through Teddy Lupin's PoV or one of the next Generation of Potters or Weasley's. You write the Harry Potter universe perfectly, you could be JK Rowling herself. (Your not are you?) |
jagadeesanenator 2008-07-14 . chapter 47That was beautiful! But how come you used a little bit of the stuff in the last book and not all of it? |
jagadeesanenator 2008-07-13 . chapter 5Hey! I loved your stories, well the ones that I've read and I should hvae reviewed, but...Im lazy...but I just thought, Doesnt Ollivader sound like Olivia Alexander put together? I just thought that Was a funny coincidence... |
CamilleBelle 2008-06-17 . chapter 47OK, seriously omg! The was the best story ever! I have to say after I had finished your others I was like wow they were so good, and i was a little skeptical about this one. But boy I shouldn't have that was just, wow I am speechless! I mean that is exactly how I imagined it all to happen! You are brilliant! |
chocoluvr 2008-06-11 . chapter 26Good chapter with Hannah reassuring Remus that its okay to date other women. Kingsley is a good friend to Tonks in telling her Remus's point of view about a potential relationship. |
chocoluvr 2008-06-06 . chapter 18Good chapter with Olivia suprising Sirius with a visit, even though she has to work. Too bad about Percy returning his Christmas present, though the younger kids may want to give it to Professor Lockhart for Boxing Day. At least Harry didn't ask Sirius and Remus if they were relieved that his parents were dead and not living in St. Mungo's. Of course if they were Harry would of been raised by Sirius and Olivia, with help from Remus. Though in the hospital Remus would of met an adult who just became a werewolf. |
chocoluvr 2008-06-04 . chapter 16Good chapter in showing Sirius's and Olivia's disappointment in her having to work over Christmas, even though she has New Year's off. Jean gave her a poor reason for scheduling her over Christmas, that he plans on giving it to those with small children and that he's scheduled those who don't have children to work over Christmas. If they get extra pay to work holidays, the parents probaly would like to work Christmas in order to pay for the presents that they're getting their children. Too bad, too many people think that if you don't have kids then you don't have a family. A better answer would of been that it was her turn to work on Christmas since she's always had it off. At least Remus told both Sirius and Olivia both about kissing Tonks and Olivia they both gave him some good advice. Though if both James and Lily had lived Sirius and Olivia would be taking care of Harry, plus being responsible for James and Lily's medical care. At least Sirius won't be alone for Christmas this year and how nice of Remus to still spend time over Christmas with Laura's family. |
chocoluvr 2008-06-01 . chapter 8Good chapter with Sirius and Olivia getting reunited and Tonks taking Remus out for a weekend of fun. At least Olivia never saw Sirius in Azkaban, since she was in France. It was good at the end when Sirius got to meet Laura again for the first time in 14 years, hopefully he'll also get to meet Andromedea his cousin. A good movie for Tonks and Remus to watch would of been Teen Wolf with Michael J. Fox. |
chocoluvr 2008-05-29 . chapter 5Dana and Olivia could also be working for the Order in finding host families for young children in case they need to be evacuated from England. With Dana as a Healer though she could also find possible long term care places for some of the high risk ltc patients at St. Mungo's in case they need to be evacuated. Good chapter with the old Order getting together. |
chocoluvr 2008-05-29 . chapter 4Good chapter with Remus letting Olivia and Dana know about Voldemort's return. Laura might even go to school with other British ex pats or their children, since quite a few people probaly left the country because of the war and just stayed gone to either get away from the bad memories or to keep their families safe. Laura might even tried to get Remus to be her real dad, by marrying her mom when she was younger. Laura could get involved in a letter writing campaign by writing Letters to the Editor to various newspapers in France and maybe Canada. Why didn't Remus take Sirius to some doggie pawties if they had any in England at a small dog treats shop in order to get him out of the house. He could also be used as a therapy dog and visit the residents at St. Mungo's, I'm sure that he would like seeing some of his cousin's handiwork. |
chocoluvr 2008-05-26 . chapter 1Good start to this story, where we get caught up in the main character's lives over the past 12 years. Two of the children, probaly had their worst memories splashed over the papers years ago. |
CrimeShowAddiction 2008-03-22 . chapter 47hey loved your hp ffs! will you be writing anymore? if so cant wait to read them! |
anonymous.individual 2008-01-14 . chapter 47OMG. that was so... good. :O lol.
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Shorty-Ace 2008-01-13 . chapter 47Wow.
i mean it, wow.
i've just spent about 2 weeks of sleepless nights and late homework assignments to read this series and i have to say it's absolutly brilliant. I've always wanted to write like this. Something that just grabbed you and wouldn't let go untill the very end. Especially in the second installment, we're everyone knew what was GOING to happen, and how no one WANTED it to happen, but i couldnt look away. I fell in love with the characters, both real AND made up and it makes me sad there wont be more. I'm sitting here wondering how Hope will grow up, and how Remus will live with the everyday aspects of being a father, especially to a teenager. Well, i guess that is left to the imaginations of your faithful readers.
I just want to review and say thank you. Thank you for one of the most amazing stories i have read in all of my 16 1/2 years.
You are truely, one of my favorie authors.
XO_Ashley |
Neumzie 2007-11-18 . chapter 47brava!!lol |