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Hopeless Lady
2006-03-11 . chapter 1
you should continue...sooner
Green Animelover
2006-01-28 . chapter 2
cute... will there be more?please just another chapter
DOEeyes
2006-01-08 . chapter 1
Well, it has potential, but this story jumps so quickly from one point to the next, it feels like i'm lost. an example would be in the end of the chapter, the bit about the river. if there is one near by, it should be mentioned earlier in the chapter, so as not to 'spring' it on your readers.Solow down and take your time, then this fic will improve =)
Impatience
2005-10-28 . chapter 2
EP! i LOVE IT! WOW~!

Continue if you want, but i like this story as it is too!
WOW~

< Impatience
SiameseWhiteFoxx
2005-10-26 . chapter 2
Aw! Cute! ;p I luv it. U should do a night scene. That would be so romantic for the 2 of them. I luv SM stories! I still have to post mine...hm...Great fic! ^-^
Mysterious Samurai
2005-10-07 . chapter 2
man...*feel temper* that can't be so rush
Mysterious Samurai
2005-10-07 . chapter 1
okay okay girl, slow. things. down.
Shy girl
2005-10-03 . chapter 2
OO
falling in love so soon?!?
still..I love you!!
Shy girl
2005-10-03 . chapter 1
nice story
Chibi-Assassin
2005-09-23 . chapter 1
nice story!^-^v
Chibi-Assassin
2005-09-23 . chapter 1
nice story!^-^v
Yahoo!
2005-09-22 . chapter 2
SWEETEST moment!
Another baka
2005-09-22 . chapter 2
*HUGE grin* how about this?*give AW a HUGE milk chocolate bar*
samuraiduck27
2005-09-20 . chapter 2
*blink* I could have sworn I already reviewed this chapter... but my review history proved me wrong once again.

Great ending- it's so sweet and fluffy! I've got a new favorite pairing; thanks! *hunts for more Sou/Misao ficcies* Keep up the awesome work!
Angie
2005-09-19 . chapter 2
Greaat!
I really like it. Your way in the descriptions is really good. Shorts and precisely. Really Good. Pleasse update soon
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