 Hopeless Lady 2006-03-11 . chapter 1you should continue...sooner |
 Green Animelover 2006-01-28 . chapter 2cute... will there be more?please just another chapter |
 DOEeyes 2006-01-08 . chapter 1Well, it has potential, but this story jumps so quickly from one point to the next, it feels like i'm lost. an example would be in the end of the chapter, the bit about the river. if there is one near by, it should be mentioned earlier in the chapter, so as not to 'spring' it on your readers.Solow down and take your time, then this fic will improve =) |
 Impatience 2005-10-28 . chapter 2 EP! i LOVE IT! WOW~!
Continue if you want, but i like this story as it is too!
WOW~
< Impatience |
 SiameseWhiteFoxx 2005-10-26 . chapter 2Aw! Cute! ;p I luv it. U should do a night scene. That would be so romantic for the 2 of them. I luv SM stories! I still have to post mine...hm...Great fic! ^-^ |
 Mysterious Samurai 2005-10-07 . chapter 2 man...*feel temper* that can't be so rush |
 Mysterious Samurai 2005-10-07 . chapter 1 okay okay girl, slow. things. down. |
 Shy girl 2005-10-03 . chapter 2 OO
falling in love so soon?!?
still..I love you!! |
 Shy girl 2005-10-03 . chapter 1 nice story |
 Chibi-Assassin 2005-09-23 . chapter 1 nice story!^-^v |
 Chibi-Assassin 2005-09-23 . chapter 1 nice story!^-^v |
 Yahoo! 2005-09-22 . chapter 2 SWEETEST moment! |
 Another baka 2005-09-22 . chapter 2 *HUGE grin* how about this?*give AW a HUGE milk chocolate bar* |
 samuraiduck27 2005-09-20 . chapter 2*blink* I could have sworn I already reviewed this chapter... but my review history proved me wrong once again.
Great ending- it's so sweet and fluffy! I've got a new favorite pairing; thanks! *hunts for more Sou/Misao ficcies* Keep up the awesome work! |
 Angie 2005-09-19 . chapter 2 Greaat!
I really like it. Your way in the descriptions is really good. Shorts and precisely. Really Good. Pleasse update soon |