Reviews for The Unquantifiable Variable

Reviews For: The Unquantifiable Variable - Reviews: Page 1 of 7

Chikacookie 2008-03-22 ch 18,	abuseGreat story!
masondixon 2008-02-27 ch 18,	abuseJust read this story today and loved it. Loed the way Charlie was able to take care of himself and others in a dangerous situation and how he knew Don would be there for him. Well-written and I thank you for writing it.
Jyaramie 2008-02-05 ch 18,	abuseLoved it. Felt so realistic. I've only watched a couple shows of Numb3rs now and you make me want to watch more.
SMARTALIENQT 2007-08-21 ch 18, anon.	abuseOMG, OMG, OMG! That was PERFECT! It actually had DEPTH! It actually had one of Charie's famous explanations! It was like an actual episode! It was BRILLIANT! Just the right degree of of CWDA (Charlie-Whumping Don-Angst), nice and long, and it was COMPLETE! Thank you! Keep writing, you could really take you skills somewhere. --SMARTALIENQT :)
TasteinMen 2007-08-14 ch 18,	abuseThis is among the best stories that I have ever read on the Eppes brothers. You got them in character perfectly, and the case was very well thought out. The entire story is well-plotted and was on a whole highly entertaining. Loves ya!
Once Upon A Twilight 2007-06-22 ch 18,	abuseyou are BRILLIANT. i love you! =D ohmg i'm practically crying! i love how you brought back the flashlights, & how everything's so seamlessly written -- you're amazing. ;)
Once Upon A Twilight 2007-06-21 ch 6,	abuseOHMG! suspense ... lololol i know there are other chapters up but i gotta run so i thought i'd just leave you this review. but believe it, i'm going to be back. =D you are SO awesome! i don't even know what it is, but i just love your details and your style!
Addisongrey 2007-01-03 ch 18,	abuse^^;; That was great! I dont know all that much about Maths but all that explaining sounded pretty hightech and cool. Loved the sentiment about Delta though XD Charlie is absolutely adorable. Hehe hes so smart. Wish his moment with the flashlight was explained abit more though. Kinda feel sorry for Jason though, loved the ending (happy ones are best after all) and always knew Don would pull through. Overall would make a great episode methinks. Maths and all. Great Story!!
Greywolf Lupous 2006-12-11 ch 18,	abuseAlways nice to see a familiar face when venturing into new fic territory, and like all your other stuff I've read, it still blows me away. Loved this story, especially the way you were able to get into Charlie's head. I'd like to tackle a Numb3rs story, but I'm afraid I couldn't do his character justice, not like you, and the math... I know you borrowed someone, but still, it was very much like watching the show. I see you've got another one in the works, so I think I might direct my attention there!
SaJi 2006-09-28 ch 1,	abuseI remember reading this story a while ago on another site somewhere. Very nice I thought. =) Really like the equation that Charlie wrote as a message, brilliant I thought.
Caroline 2006-08-28 ch 18, anon.	abuseJust read your story and all I can say is - WOW. The story was riviting - you wrote this beautifully. Thank you so much.
freeflow 2006-08-11 ch 18,	abuseI fell in to this story via your Bonanza fics, and had to review. You have as your profile a single sentence: 'Love to write and read, especially stories that are driven by relationships.' Succinct as this, you could not sum up your single greatest talent in any other way. You capture in your stories the relationships - and trials that accompany them - with such poise that it feels as though each scene is playing out before the reader. And they are always in character. The combination of these skills makes your work a pleasure to read, and I am so grateful to have found your profile page. The only problem is, now I've read your stories, I still want more. So if you could just ignore Real Life for a while, and tie yourself to the keyboard for a few weeks..? Just joking. But rest assured there are definetly some people out here in cyber space waiting for your next update!
macberly 2006-07-31 ch 18,	abuseOMG! I just read this entire story and I must say that it is one of the best I have ever had the privelage to read! I love how you balanced Charlie's inexperience with these type of situations and he quick thinking and creative mind! He was so believable! I loved Don and his fight for control as agent and brother! and to have Alan there being the worrying dad! Wonderful job! I was crying at the end! I love Charlies never ending belief that Don will always be there for him! Thank you for sharing this!
Camlost 2006-07-12 ch 18,	abuseaww! so cute! the last chapter is really, really sweet, especially the equation with delta for don, i love the idea! this is one of the few REALLY good numb3rs fanfic i've read so far, it's really nice. i especially like the beginning where charlie is in the store... you write really well and i like the way you wrote about actual equations (even if it doesn't stand for real math), i haven't seen that very often. i also love how you write about the relationship between don & charlie, and also how you've brought in some nice original characters (they could have even been a bit more involved in the whole thing, especially the female agent. perhaps you could have shown her actually talking to terry or don or charlie after the whole thing) another thing that's really good, is how you've structured the story, the chapters and parts are not too short but also not too long. and every chapter has one clear theme (1 - before 2- the beginning 3 - ...) all in all, well Don :-) x, camlost
The Lazy Reviewer 2006-06-08 ch 18, anon.	abusethat was just, like, wow, i mean, you know, wow... wow... wow... and did i say wow?

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