Reviews for Lying in the Bed I Made

Reviews For: Lying in the Bed I Made

KarenleFay 2006-01-22 ch 4,	abuseYes!! A new chapter! Boy am I glad I checked my fics today... I love the way you interpret Greg as such a thinker--his brain never stops with the constant banter, whether that be negativity towards himself or love towards Nick. His character is right on target in every chapter in every fic you write about him. Thank you for such fantastic reading.
KarenleFay 2005-09-08 ch 3,	abuseOne word: wow. I am crying, once again, and so glad that Nick finally confronted Greg. The anger was a bit strange to me at first, but ended up making complete sense. Of course, I loved the ending when they hold onto each other because their lives truly do depend on it. I'm so amazed and grateful that I found this story, especially because of the connection with my own life. One of my best friends has been struggling with depression, and this story has given me the strength to confront and help her. Thank you, thank you, thank you. I would definitely be interested in any other stories you've written, but your e-mail didn't show up at the bottom? I'll check your profile for it, and e-mail you off of there. Well, in conclusion - I loved it. You're one of the best authors I've ever read on this site, and I'm adding you to my Favorite Authors list, and this story to my Favorite Stories list. Thank you.
Read300300 2005-09-04 ch 3,	abuseGIRL! YOU'RE HERE! DANCES FOR JOY Once again, this is such a great story (not sure if I reviewed at lj, though if I didn't, then I don't know why) This story is amazing... I love you to death!
Fraying 2005-09-01 ch 3,	abuseY'know that horrible broken-hearted feeling you get when...well, when your heart's broken? This is so fabulously written that I actually felt that while reading it. I don't normally read angst, because there's obviously enough of that in everyday life, but I really did thoroughly enjoy this, as much as it upset me. You somehow manage to escape the common stigma of 'oh woe is me' that's present in so many angst fics. Thank you. Oh, and by the way, I'm also on LiveJournal. I'm slightly_frayed there. I chose to post this here because I figured it would be less likely to drown in a sea of LJ comments.
boboskiwatin 2005-09-01 ch 3,	abuseyou/this story are/is so KICK-**!
Goody 2005-08-30 ch 3,	abuseHey SHacky, awesome fic you have going here, I'm really enjoying it. You make an awesome distinction between Lab Rat Greg and CSI Sanders because on the show you can really see the difference and you've made a great point of it here in this fic, showing all the differences between the two which is really incredible. I especially loved the first chapter, it was a really great analysis of Greg's psyche and how he could fall into such a depression like this. But you also made a really good point in chapter 2, about Greg being sent to get trace from the burn victim, I never once thought about how Greg would feel going to the burn unit, I thought that was a really great insight, so kudos. Everything is really emotional and I'm enjoying the tension. Truly. Very nice stuff. You have a few typos that catch my eye, nothing too outstanding, but a bunch of little ones can take away from the flow. If you ever need something beta-ed don't hesitate to write. I've got internet full time now so I'm pretty sure I could find the time no problem. Can't wait for the next chapter though, very awesome stuff. Later days, Goody
Kate K 2005-08-30 ch 3,	abuseWell done! You did an awesome job with the raw emotions of both Nick and Greg! And I'm glad you didn't have Greg kill himself! Will there be an update showing him on the road to recovery, or the two of them happily together after surviving this crisis?
takeitbacktosquareone 2005-08-30 ch 3,	abuseOh my god. This is so sad, but I love it so much. I feels so real. Please keep going!! -Kat.
Nation El-Diablo 2005-08-30 ch 3,	abuseWow this is really good, it's so powerful! i can't wiat for more, it's great
nicky69 2005-08-28 ch 2,	abuseWow,this is very powerful stuff.I love that you recognize that in real life there is not always a happy ending and that not everyone can just pick up and move on after as if nothing had happened after traumatic events.Too often we see characters simply put the bad things that happen to them behind them with no consequences .Well I like consequences.They may be good,bad,messy,painful and complicated but thats what makes life interesting and worthwhile .Update soon(Pretty Please).Hugs and stuff Lou.
KarenleFay 2005-08-25 ch 2,	abuse...still sobbing. What a fantastic and heart-breaking story. I am still in shock from how much you go into Greg and Nick's emotions; it's so great and realistic. Thank you, and please continue soon.
KarenleFay 2005-08-25 ch 1,	abuseOh... my... god. I'm crying so much right now. I need to read the second chapter.
Sarcastic Realist 2005-08-25 ch 2,	abuseWow. Sob That's so sad. Please update soon.
sugar230 2005-08-23 ch 1,	abuseoh wow...really ...wow. I hope that wasn't the end of this story because I thought it was amazing and I really hope there's more to read coming soon. Wow!

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