 Noteweaver 2008-08-15 . chapter 1I think maybe Nino and Rebecca were a tiny bit out of character, but it wasn't outrageous. Quite a peculiar reunion scenario, but well-written nevertheless. Good job. |
 Absol Master 2007-08-17 . chapter 1My goodness...DarkBlaziken/Fire Assassin keeps saying you're a good author. I see it's true.
Unbelievable. I can't imagine anyone writing as well as you anywhere. I think all your stories are worth reading, though they're mainly 4k+. I usually don't read stories longer than that, but your stories are an exception.
In other words, they're simply PERFECT!
About this story:
Yes, very nice. I'm glad you made Wil and Rebecca get married. Hehe. I'm a great supporter of that pairing.
Anyway, good description of the mood and the feelings of the characters. I could have cried, if I hadn't told myself not to.
Though just wondering if they really have guest rooms in Elibe...
~from Absol Master, a.k.a. Wil, a.k.a. Sceptile Rayquaza, a.k.a. Fire Demon, a.k.a. T etc. |
 DarkBlaziken 2007-06-22 . chapter 1That was Beautiful! though i dont like Jaffar, but this fic's good!
P.S. i don't like Jaffar cos i can never forgive him for killing Leila...
Assassins still rock however!
~FireAssassin |
 Kent13 2006-03-11 . chapter 1Excellent! 8.5/10 |
 Almandine-Azaleea 2006-01-25 . chapter 1It was wonderful! I love the ending^_^ So fluffy! |
 Chellybean 2005-10-30 . chapter 1 Luffed it. Enough said. ^_^ |
 Kiri-Ryu 2005-10-24 . chapter 1Greetings TheOneAndOnlyT! Once again, I have to commend you on another wonderful story.
But I have to admit, there is something... wrong... about it. I can't pinpoint it, but it is definitely there. It could be Nino's personality, but I can understand how spending twelve years searching could do that to her. Meh, whatever it was it was only a minor mistake and only blemished my enjoyment of the story a little bit. And yes, the ending was awfully clichéd, but it suited it I think.
I felt that this was not as well written as a number of your other stories, but overall a lovely fic that made me smile from ear to ear. Good luck with college, and I hope you DO find the time to write something. I simply adore your fics (As you already know) and can't wait for you to write another one. |
 FireEdge 2005-09-10 . chapter 1I'm so so sorry that I haven't been around for so long. But my computer's been down for the past month and I just got it back a few days ago. To be precise, it's a new computer, so it took me a while to adjust to it. Anyway, now I finally had the time to read your new fanfic!
I like the concept of your story, having a fic where we finally see Jaffar and Nino reunited. I really liked the way you portrayed Nino. How she was travel-worn and ever-searching. How she was so tired but still hopeful. It was a bit sad when her and Rebecca fought. But wasn't it a surprise when Jaffar showed up at Rebecca's door? I laughed a bit at the irony of that part.
I personally loved the ending. I'm a sap for those cheesy fluffy endings ;). I'm so happy that they finally found each other. I was very satisfied with how you made Nino and Jaffar react to each other.
It's such a shame that you won't be writing as often (but at least you're still reading!). But I can relate, sort of. I may not be going to college, but I've started high school, and I have to put my school work before writing. Hopefully, I'll still be able to get a lot of stories up still. Be seeing you soon, I hope! |
 Min the Noodle 2005-08-31 . chapter 1Whoa.
This was one of the best Jaffar/Nino stories I've ever read! I loved the entire thing- the plot, the emotion, the description... It seemed so real! I didn't know that Nino searched for Jaffar that long, but the devotion that must have taken- wow!
If all of your writing is this good, I'll be reading and reviewing! Thanks for writing this excellent story for everyone to read! |
 Toki Kishitani 2005-08-29 . chapter 1=^.^= *purr* You always, ALWAYS manage to make me smile when I read your fics. And this is definetly one of your best. It's just so... so... Ah! There are no words to describe something this wonderful! =D *pokes* You. MUST. Keep. Writing. I commandeth you!
And if you ever write a novel (which you should), say somewhere that you were TheOneAndOnlyT on that way I'll know it's you and buy that book. ^^
I'm being completely serious you know. =)
I hope this review gives you the same warm, happy feeling that your stories give me. =)
So, good luck with college and KEEP WRITING!
~Cool-chan |
 Inferno-Hero 2005-08-28 . chapter 1Good luck at college, also I thought it was an extremely good story... I can't say anything about cliche' fluffyness since... I have written one of the most gag reflex inducing things in this section, and it sometimes makes me shudder in disgust, but it's a semi marginal slightly ok disgust... I think |
 Jeanie 2005-08-26 . chapter 1 ^_^ YOU'RE ALIVE! (Yes, sue me on excessive punctuation. I can't help it.)
Yes, I love Nino/Jaffar, and yes, overall I love the ficcie very much. But it was horribly cliché at the end... If not for the excellent beginning (I like lots of emotion), the end would have seemed worse. Don't get me wrong, I like the fic muchly, but... Jaffar smiling scares me for some reason. o.O
T.T Yes, school is very stressful. It's a shame the teachers don't believe in babying freshmen; I've had so much work to do lately...
Anyway, good luck in college (try not to stress TOO much ^_~), but I hope you can still write here since you're so good at it! |
 Ayumi187 2005-08-25 . chapter 1Very well-written, but I still hate Nino and the JaffarNino pairing. ^_^ You almost made me dismiss this pairing as acceptable, though. That's definitely something.
Have fun in college! |
 Lemurian 04 (reader of Two A) 2005-08-24 . chapter 1 * stunned * It was just...so...beautiful. This Fic is the best romance I've read, without any second thought. Congrats, and good luck at college. |
 K-Gforever 2005-08-23 . chapter 1Oh I'm so glad you made this! ^_^ You're one of my favorite authors and ofcourse you didn't dissapoint me at all!
P.S. could you read my story A New past? It's not as good as your righting but I'm rather proud of it. And you should read Swordchick's Jaffar's girlfriend and after the end. :3 |
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