Amazing! just amazing..

Your story is wonderful.The Characters were so well-written and the traces of Humour in the story certainly made it a very lively read.Gaara's characterization was so unique different frim all the 'heartless monster' angst rubbish which is so commonly found.Your Neji was such an interesting character to read.

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Your writing is wonderful and the traces of humour in it does make for a very lively read.Gaara's potrayal is excellent,extraordinary compared to the usual potrayals of him being a 'heartless monster' while your Neji is such an interesting character to read.

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This is just so sweet. :'3

I'm loving this story so much!

Thank you for sharing.

Take care.

SOSWEET! I especially loved the little verses, I guess you could call them, in italics. Did you make them up? They're really, really good.

And I LOVE how you make the sand and gourd all...alive and breathing. Made me laugh. XD

The fruit idea was so cute. Now I want strawberries...

Is this a oneshot, or will it continue? I do hope it continues. So cute...made me coo at the computer screen. (grin)

Aw! So sweet. And kawaii! And no worries. The sand fit in nicely. And yes I know its hard to work with two silent types with huge egos that must always be dominate. _ Roleplaying has done that to me. Anyways enough blabble I loved this chapter. _ Cant wait to you publish something else. So long!

so cute

Alana: OMG I love this fic, One of my fav Naruto pairings is in it! *sighs happly*

Evo: her fav Pairing beside SasukeNaruto are GaaraNeji!

Alana: Oh I hope she put SasukeNaruto pairing in here to!

Evo: *sighs* fangils!

I really like this! The poem at the end is great, and Neji's whole 'it's good to live with a demon' thing is fun Their characterizations were amusing, to say the least!

wow that was awsome! Plz continue!

Oh, I read that in the community. I loved it. Very well writen, using the kisses just perfectly so that they work with the way the story is going.