This is really cute in a sad sort of way. The end is a bit sad, but not really. I like it!

I've really never read a story where Tsuzuki was the sick one, but that was adorable. Poor Hisoka is his ice cream :3 That's so sweet.

Oh, cute, oh VERY very very very vyer cute *squeals* So cute! I love how your portraed Hisoka! It was the perfect blend of sweetness andunguarded and emotion without making him seem the least bit OOC, and I loved the conclusion he came to on his feelings for Tsuzuki. I liked how they were so... close, without it breaching anythign except familiarity. Awesome! I'm so impressed with how you described their bond, making it seem so familiar and friendly without going too far, and keepign everything in character. Your tatsumi was funny without being ooc either. perfect! I liked the icecream thing too ^^ OMG< LOVED IT!

Wow! That's all I can say.

EEYAH! CUTE! Hehe, I was going through my YMN comics and thinking I really wanted to read some fanfics again coz I dont have any YNM in english and haven't seen the anime in forever. Had to have my obsession fed and you did it. It was so very cute and it had some REALLY wonderful descriptions in it. Very sweet and adorible fic. Thank you for writing it

Lol. That was a sweet little one-shot. I love this pairing, and you wrote it quite well. ^^
~ LittleDarkOne

AW! That was so cute.

hee hee. loved it! *grins*
so cute =)
that part with the ice cream was priceless *can't stop grining* =)

kawai! XD~ i love this~ *continues squealing* yeay! finally some gorgeous fluff to sooth my dark mood ~ ^_^

aww so cute

that's so sweet!!

huggles n kisses
dref

Sheesh you're good. ^^ I only wonder the things you could make happen if you ever decided to up your ratings. ;) ::Hentai grin::

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So very, very pretty. ^_^ I love the way you write thoughts, and the way you switch back and forth like that. It's so cute that they missed each other while they were apart, too-- and even cuter when they get back together. ^_^ Lovely work. ^__^

AWWWW!!!^^ so sweeeeet! I loved it! yes sap is the best! you are the best for writing that one!....you will likely be bothered by me again!^^