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| Euphemism 2007-04-01 ch 5, | abuseInteresting... the chase for Ranma appears to be starting all over again, though perhaps things will be more civilised this time. As for 'Second Time Around', I read a good part of it before I started to hate the R/A pairing, and it was nice, mostly. Common reactions to it is that it lost most of its edge once the romantic entanglements were gone. |
| Euphemism 2007-04-01 ch 3, | abuseI have a soft spot for stories where Ranma and Mousse are friends, or at least allies. Finding out that Mousse played such a role in the book that Shampoo's obsessed over - priceless! And the way everyone's so blind over the fact that Ranma wrote the stories... Then again, it is (a) easy to accept the coincidence because it's Nerima, and (b) everyone is underestimating Ranma's intelligence. ^_^ Ranma's jabs are Nabiki here were also quite amusing. |
| Euphemism 2007-04-01 ch 1, | abuseIt seemed obvious from the start that Ranma was actually the writer of the book series, but the fact that the protagonist was female was confusing. Then the timeline was established, as was Ranma's hidden intelligence. ^_^ Very intriguing start. It seemed at first that Ranma being disowned was a bad thing, given how it is typically something quite shameful, but considering how everything seemed to have worked out, perhaps Ranma engineered everything with his grandfather. Kasumi being an Amazon at heart is fairly creepy, actually, after having read Twin Trouble - I don't really like the Kasumi there, as she seems to be manipulating Ranma (and others) for her own amusement. Still, I like the refreshing way all your characters are subtly different from canon. |
| corsair338 2007-03-12 ch 5, | abuseI enjoyed reading your story and i hope you havent give up on it! |
| Anonymous 2006-12-19 ch 5, anon. | abuseI hope you update soon. I like this concept, the characterzation, and teh story. |
| Bobboky 2006-08-19 ch 5, | abusecool |
| conlan0414863 2006-08-11 ch 5, | abusekeep on typing |
| 0K0 2006-08-08 ch 5, | abusereally good wish ur chapters were longer but oh well |
| anon 2006-08-07 ch 5, anon. | abusegreat story! Hope you update soon. I am curious on how Shinobu will react to be ask to draw the manga and then Nabiki and Motoko will find out, not to mention I want to see how Nabiki and Ranma's talk goes. Lots and lots to look forward to, can't wait to read them all. |
| Hirrayami Otoni 2006-08-04 ch 5, | abuseXD! I had fun with this chapter! oh yes. So Shinobu is developing a crush on ranma now? QUITE intirguing... I personally start to like the idea. I am in good terms with Shinobu, she's cute good hearted and a greta girl. Specially of Love Hina vol. 14 epiloge when she's 18? She has become quite beautiful. Fun to say that her personality had quite changed from a timid girl to a open minded quite brave and agresive girl. Well I guess puberty can do things to ya, ne? Side note, I personally as well can confirm and tell you about "Ranma: The second time around" IF is the one I think it is. The artist is a quite great novelist and the story has developed quite excelent that will ask you for more. You should try it once if you are willing to. Is one of my Fav ranma-stories so far. |
| Hirrayami Otoni 2006-08-04 ch 4, | abuseLove Hina is going to be in it too? heh I always thought crossover of ranma and love hina made good partnership. You should read "Diamonds in the Rough" by Brian Randall. Really great Ranma-love hina novel. |
| ranma girl 14 2006-08-04 ch 5, | abusereally really good, plz plz plz update soon ^_^ |
| dana-san 2006-08-04 ch 5, | abuseNice update! Reread the whole thing! I have never read the other manga but I think I get it. Would love to know why Tomoe thinks he is a girl. |
| Lerris 2006-08-04 ch 5, | abuseThis looks good, but i suspect I'd have to reread part of the earlier parts to fully follow it. I begin to think that summaries of what has gone before may be a good idea for new chapters of big stories, at least if it has been awhile since the story updated. |
| weebee 2006-08-04 ch 5, | abuseyo! Nice fic here. I love it! Keep it up and I hope to see mre soon. PS: I will send u a brief synopsis of Rannma, a second time around through PM, so it's not review advertising... |