A very well written story. Not one of a type that I normally read in teh Ranma genre. Some of your characters interactions with each other don't seem to flow very well. Although an interesting take on the various characters in the story a bit more background on the situations would be helpful to those not familiar with love hina and others.

Seems like my review didn't show up (IE was crashing at the time, I should've been using Opera).

So short version, good stuff, thanks for mentioning in Fukufics thread, wow published exactly three years ago tomorrow, etc.

Not bad

Good story

good

Nice chapter, can't wait to see more!
plz plz update soon! ^_^

interesting story so far, keep up the good work, byes

"Right now only Kasumi, Mousse and Makoto know Ranma is Mizuno Ami." Oh. Did I mention I am a ** that like to open my mouth and not read first? Anyway I should give an actual review. This fanfiction isn't the usual type that I read. Heck, your story concept is the reason why I read your story. It's, the concept, very unique and like "GAH! I need to know where the hell lioconvoy is going to go with it." What's lacking so far from what I usually read is romance.

Great to see this fic updated. As for Ranma's pen name, I'm a bit uncomfortable with borrowing complete names from other series when and if there is no connection. This is just a suggestion for your future fics.

I have a theory after reading up to half of chapter 3. Ranma talks about his adventures to Makochan and Makochan is actually the writer of Wild Horse. M...

Love the story so far,
only complaint was in earlier chapters.
Mint is mixed with a wolf not a fox(i think)
anyways can't wait untill the next chapter.

Fun chapter, and going to look forward to where things go next time with Ranma and the gang that's around him now.

Interesting... the chase for Ranma appears to be starting all over again, though perhaps things will be more civilised this time.

As for 'Second Time Around', I read a good part of it before I started to hate the R/A pairing, and it was nice, mostly. Common reactions to it is that it lost most of its edge once the romantic entanglements were gone.

I have a soft spot for stories where Ranma and Mousse are friends, or at least allies. Finding out that Mousse played such a role in the book that Shampoo's obsessed over - priceless! And the way everyone's so blind over the fact that Ranma wrote the stories... Then again, it is (a) easy to accept the coincidence because it's Nerima, and (b) everyone is underestimating Ranma's intelligence. ^_^ Ranma's jabs are Nabiki here were also quite amusing.

It seemed obvious from the start that Ranma was actually the writer of the book series, but the fact that the protagonist was female was confusing. Then the timeline was established, as was Ranma's hidden intelligence. ^_^

Very intriguing start. It seemed at first that Ranma being disowned was a bad thing, given how it is typically something quite shameful, but considering how everything seemed to have worked out, perhaps Ranma engineered everything with his grandfather.

Kasumi being an Amazon at heart is fairly creepy, actually, after having read Twin Trouble - I don't really like the Kasumi there, as she seems to be manipulating Ranma (and others) for her own amusement. Still, I like the refreshing way all your characters are subtly different from canon.