I liked! I loved the last part, the first paragraph at the end with Tsuzuki's pov. 'What did you *think* I was?' It seemed very true of him. And WOW... I just zoned out for like, 5 minutes straight playing a scenario in my head that i now wanna desperately write. Thank you! Love your stuff. SO well written, sweet, angsty, totally IC, which is something I adrmire in this age of bad characterization.

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_ pika pika shiny fic!

write more soon, ne?

this was a very good fic, no da!

Again, another natural style fic.

At first this seemed a bit confusing, but then again I noticed you were writing about the Kyoto arc thing. _' Silly me. It's nicely done again. I just love how Tatsumi came out - I really don't see any OOC in this fic of yours. Nice work!

Sweet and touching. I love a concerned Tatsumi and Hisoka, I love their gentle care for Tsuzuki-san. How cute these characters are, and how cute this story is. Thanks for the great job.

Waaa, pretty. The Tatsumi and Hisoka relationship always kind of interested me. I think that Tatsumi could be exactly the sort of solid, supportive, older brother figure that Hisoka needs. Awesomely written- lovely, as usual.

I like this story. I think it was possible to happen since Hisoka always closed himself from other. I like the way Tatsumi comforted him. Good story really.

That was very well-written... The characterization didn't seem off at all to me. Just one litle nit-pick, though: Tatsumi's eyes are dark blue. That's my favorite thing about him *_*

That was very well-written... The characterization didn't seem off at all to me. Just one litle nit-pick, though: Tatsumi's eyes are dark blue. That's my favorite thing about him *_*

Spiffy! I like it! You pulled off Tatsumi perfectly. It was sweet, but sappy. And...well... It was great!

Enjoyable. I really like this fic. It doesn't suggest an kind of Shounen ai or yaoi but friend ship and if you want to you can take it as a TxT or TxH or what ever. Very lovely, I said it once and I'll say it again, very enjoyable.

Sweet... Poor Tsuzuki-san... Tatsumi seems a little, I dunno, too outgoing, too open with his emotions. But I like the idea of TatsH being friends.

Great Story! I liked it!