Blue Eyed Dragon Girl 2005-08-24 . chapter 1You know, I happen to like Wesley. No one ever gives him enough credit. I can tell you're an obvious Wesley hater and I guess that's why he is portrayed so badly in this. I personally don't think he's THAT annoying but I could at least enjoy some of the humor in this, even if I didn't quite agree with it. It was alittle confusing at the end there when it transitioned into the whole thing being a day dream. I didn't pick up on that right away. I had to read it more than once. You might want to work on that in future stories about making that stuff more clear. For the most part it was well written I just can't say I completely enjoyed the story. But like I said, I'm slightly biast cuz I like Wesley. |