Hilarious! So many spot on touches and such a great twist with the Sueism. And my absolute favourite line;

"by the way his features altered to change a romantic, Heathcliffean male lead back into a greasy bastard, reality was winning." That had me rolling around in stitches ;)

LoL ^_^

Interesting twist that the Mary-Sue was the mom instead of an adolescent. Really good story.

I really like how you've written this story. It's to the point without the gratuitous violence that some other authors seem compelled to use.

Hope acts like a human being, and that's because she is. Poor Hope, having to be the responsible one of the family. I love her nervous grin when she has to confront her professor.

Go you little legend you! That is brilliant, the most original take on Mary-Sueism yet! If only those of such boring Suisms would listen! You rock!

One word: Hilarious

Great story, I really like this, and you write their personalities very well, better than I would have done. Keep writing, this is fun and hasn't been done before, the daughter of a Sue and a troll agent.

Followed you here from Deleterius. Wonderful parody.

Charity had had a child in a fit of angsty backstory eleven years ago

*gigglesnort* That was priceless!

Brilliant! Brilliant! My sue-hunting fic could never beat this--marvellously written. :thumbsup:

*snort*

A very funny story you got there. Poor Snape. I kinda like Hope. Lol.