No, no, no! It is absolutely, posively EVIL to stop writing a story there, especially when it's such an amazingly interesting story such as yours. I know it's been a very long time since you last updated, but do you think you could perhaps consider finishing it? I shall die otherwise, and it's such a shame to leave something like this in the mouting pile of unfinished stories in this section.

Wow, this is really good! I really like the style you write in, and the story's very intriguing.

Incidentally, your penname reminds me of bread. :D Sorry.

*sniffles* please update, PLEASE *begins sobbing* i cant take it! i have to know whats gonna happen!(unless wonka dies- then you can just let the story fade away) so please UPDATE! *passes out on laptop*

I,m criying now. too sad too sad.( I really am crying its odd I cried less when Boromir died In FOTr.)

Wait I still don't get what he has. Is it just the stroke? Please Don't kill Wonka! PLEASE.

This is a great story and a great chapter. I don't know why no one has gotten around to reviewing this last chapter but I hope that you update soon!

I adore your story. I am waiting eagerly to find out what happens next!

Thank you for sharing :)

Dude/ma'am/sir/Ms/Mr...I deliberately made an account JUST to review/comment on your wonderful story. I am absolutely in love with it. The only thing I'd have to say is that Willy seems a TINY bit out of character, especially when it came to the secrecy behind his, aherm, snozzwanger egg, and then with the interaction with the children at the hospital. Dying of a brain tumor or not, I just don't think he'd be the type to open up like that to children with analogies. However, I STILL LOVE THIS! You got me all choked up and waiting on the next chapter! I'm actually working on a story with a sort of similar theme...sorta. ~:D Anyway...awesome work, PLEASE LET THE NEXT CHAPTER FLY FROM YOUR FINGERS AT A RAPID SPEED! ~:)

I really like this story and am looking forward to the next chapter soon. The charachterization is good and the writing style creates a deffinet mood. The one thing I have a problem with is that this chapter is maybe a little too sweet. Even if they're not little monsters like the ones that took the tour, sick kids can be a lot to handle. It seens to me that that a probably a few kids would be nice to Willy, while the rest would be trying to crawl all over him, ask questions about the factory, and generaly harrass him. I feel so bad for him, having to be in the hospital. That takes the heart out of lots of normal people, let alone Willy, who is used to living in total privacy, where everything is colorful and happy. I know this is kind of morbid, but I wonder if now that he can't hide his sickness from Charlie, he will want to stop treatment and just live out whatever time he has left at home.

I CAN'T believe I forgot to put you on my ALERT LIST! *kicks self mentally* And HOW LONG has this chapter been up?? I don't know, but I wouldn't I suppose since I WASN'T ALERTED!

If you make Wonka live, would you please consider writing a alternate ending? I love death fic's and people seem to have a aversion to killing off Mr. Wonka.

Arrgh! Poor, poor Willy! Was the surgery successful? Is he going to need chemo or radiotherapy?

*crosses fingers* Please let Willy be okay!

Eventually...

As this is an excellent fic and I would hate for it to end too soon.

Keep writing!

Poor Mr. Wonka. I did like the little story-telling, very sweet and tender.

I can but say that I wait in breathless anticipation for the next chapter.

Cheers!

~The Lady of Light~

(sorry for not reviewing other chapter)
Rightyo, i so so so need to know what's going to happen, PLEASE more soon!
Poor mr Wonka, bless him.
This is such a sad story, don't think i've ever cried so much. :')
so well done! I love it,
x.x

aw this is so sad! *sobs* poor Willy :( I hope you let him get better! This is a very touching story though and I absolutely love it Keep on updating :)