Hi. I was just going through stories I read quite some time ago and re-read Runaway Dragon which in turn lead me to this story. I just read it in its entirety and was curious if you planned to continue it? I really enjoyed what you have so far and would really like to see what happens next.

I didn't like many elements of this story - the way you portray Ron, for one, and how far you went from canon with the whole Templar/Catholicism issue (and, of course, that it isn't finished) - and yet I enjoyed it enough to read it for the third time now.

The catar are just great, especially the differences between the clans and the ways the catar interact with each other. I would have liked to see Raven's meeting with the two warrior leaders and of course the meeting at Stonehenge, as well as Dumbledore's reaction to finding out about Raven.

The interaction with the Weasley twins was great, too. I can see Snape being totally annoyed by them and disliking them greatly, but I can see him loving their creativeness and interest in his subject as well. And I'll admit to liking the second possibility far more.

I could go on like this (Luna, Pomfrey, Founders, ...!), but I think you'll get the point. You really managed to make those characters seem alive.

Thank you for this story!

Brilliant

Can't wait to see where this will go :)

Please write more and update soon!

nice

I sense a cartoonish and over the top portrayal of the Knights Templar ahead.

Poor poor Sir Fulko, if Mdm. Pomfrey get him close soon Hogwarts is going to need a new Religion teacher/ templar on site ( please let that happen), hope you can continue this story soon, it's great and every time I check it for updates I enjoy re-reading some favorite chapters that way I enjoy it more and after this chapter ( re-read for 10º time ) ).

OMG das war echt ein heftiges Kapitel! Ich hätte nie gedacht, dass dieser Templer so eine dämliche Aktion startet und so eine Panik auslöst. Eher hätte ich angenommen, er würde den Orden informieren und alle Hogwartsbewohner gründlich durchchecken. Hab mir schon überlegt, wie sich die Catar da rauswinden wollen. XD

Es macht dir hoffentlich nichts aus, wenn ich auf deutsch schreibe? Lesen ist kein Problem, aber um zu schreiben hab ich einfach nicht genügend Vokabular, um alles ausdrücken zu können, was ich sagen will.

Ich war übrigens sehr überrascht, als ich gelesen hast, dass du deutsch sprichst. Hätte ich nicht erwartet. .

Dazu sollte ich vielleicht erklären, dass ich deine Fanfics schon seit Jahren kenne und liebe. Zumindest My Name's Severus und Runaway Dragon. Ich hab die Übersetzung gelesen und war begeistert, aber ich wusste nicht, dass die Originalsprache englisch war, noch nicht mal, dass sie vom selben Autor sind...

Erst weil ich die Storys noch mal lesen wollte(bzw. ich hab sie nie zu Ende gelesen) und weil die Seite neu aufgebaut wird und deswegen die meisten FFs nicht on waren, habe ich nach einer anderen Seite gesucht.

So bin ich hierhin geraten und bin wirklich froh darüber, weil ich dir so mal sagen kann, wie sehr mich deine Storys begeistern! Ich find deinen Schreibstil bewundernswert, er ist so lebendig und einfühlsam. Es wird trotz der Länge nie langweilig und es geschehen immer unerwartete Dinge.

Bitte, bitte schreib weiter! Die Catare sind so toll. Ich möchte wissen, wie es weiter geht...

Viele, liebe Grüße

Thanks for keeping up with this fic. I'm enjoying it. I particularly liked the chapter where the kittens talk about heroes and how Firewheel says Raven is hers. I just *cannot* resist mentor Snape and original characters who look up to him. Since I love cats, this is icing on the cake. Please keep this going.

BTW, I for one like the Ron-bashing. I don't like his character much at all in canon, so this is gratifying. Oh, and so is your mockery of Christian fanaticism. Way to go.

Just wondering when you'll be posting again. Have enjoyed reading this story very much. Wonder what the kittens have been up to and Ron. Please, post soon.

just re-read this story, again, and still love it - good work!

looking forward to the next update :)

Yay! Another chapter! I'm glad to see that your temporary abandonment of this story has ended!

Poor Poppy. All those students! I don't blame her for being made with Fulko!

- Amy

another great chapter...hmm I don't know what I want to happen more, dumbledore to find out about raven or dumbledore to never find out about raven...I know that some delicious scenes are coming up and that sends shivers down my spine! Please keep up the excellent work!

Thanks for posting! Glad that your computer is up and running. Enjoyed the last few lines from this chapter having a good laugh. We had a TV show called "The last Templar" and it reminded me of your story mostly of Saint Aignon. Post soon.

Yes! You've updated! Great chapter, does Fulko think there are catar arownd now? What'll happen next?