I think it could have used more fight scenes :-)

That being said it was a good story, just one thing bugged me. You said that the fight had 'had only been going on for about 20 minutes it seemed like forever' A fight that has been going on for 20 minutes really would seem like forever, because most fights are long done in that time. The longest fight that I've witnessed was only five minutes, and the people in the fight felt like it had been much more.

Wow, good job! I liked it! lol!

lol! I really loved your story!

Well, kind of short don't you think? Well, either way it's good.

I did enjoy that.

Yes, yes you did mention YAY!v gud, even tho I DONT HAVE SKY(note the hint to parents)and thus do not watch Andromeda, is still v gud.

Um-kai, byeeeeeeeeeeeeeee evrybdy!

I liked it. It was funny! Especially Harper wanting to get that dude back!

glad to see the second part! Funny story. Write more!

lol I was waiting for a continue with this story! lol Awesome job. Although a bit short. Have you thought about doing more? lol I can wish, can't I? :)

That was great! Really funny. Sounds exactly like something Harper would do. I hope you finish it soon.

Please finish, this was great, so far its great. But I really need the ending.

This is very cool. I want the crew to kick some major ass.

*L* i really like this one

its hilarious!

lol This is sort of a funny and dramtic story in one...lol But I like it! Get come more out...pleeeease! :)

I totally loved it. Keep writing.