   Andrea Nefisto
2008-05-11 . chapter 14Really, you're a marvellous writter, you have a very simple way of telling things but the effect is so much more deeper. 'About:Frustration' and 'About:Time' were so incredible; the way you use the secondary characters like Temari, the new Kazekage, Mark XD, the seconday/primary (if I could say) like Ino, and later Benji who turn out to be a gorgeous boy is awesome, not to mention Sakura's and Gaara's evolution on the whole series. Even if the romance was like hiding, everything was beautiful and even sweet. The scene in the bath when Sakura was shaving Gaara was simple and sweet, Benji's reaction when she saw they were back was also really beautiful. Your writting is pretty good, good spelling and grammar; I tend to be a little picky cause being english a language I learned at school, I had to learn a lot of spelling. This fanfiction was a pleasure to read, the end was so simple, short but full at the same time. Stories like this really makes my day, Thanks for writing! Could you believe, yesterday I came from my final exam of the from the college (this term is harder than the previous ones, I have two groups of examns, the first are a month and a half after the begging of this term, and then come the finals), the thing ois yesterday was y last and most difficult exam, I think it went right and then came and started reading your story cause it was next in line. That was about 5 pm and kept on reading till 4am this morning XD. I has to sleep cause today was mothers day here in Perú and we were going out. Then we arrived home at 8pm and now 9:58pm I'm saying good bye cause tomorrow I have classes at 10 am and I'm a HEAVY sleeper. Lot of candies and cookies for you! Have a god day! (See how happy you made me?) |
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