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Alymora 2008-06-27 ch 14,	abuseNyah! I love this story and the one that it's a sequal to.
Andrea Nefisto 2008-05-11 ch 14,	abuseReally, you're a marvellous writter, you have a very simple way of telling things but the effect is so much more deeper. 'About:Frustration' and 'About:Time' were so incredible; the way you use the secondary characters like Temari, the new Kazekage, Mark XD, the seconday/primary (if I could say) like Ino, and later Benji who turn out to be a gorgeous boy is awesome, not to mention Sakura's and Gaara's evolution on the whole series. Even if the romance was like hiding, everything was beautiful and even sweet. The scene in the bath when Sakura was shaving Gaara was simple and sweet, Benji's reaction when she saw they were back was also really beautiful. Your writting is pretty good, good spelling and grammar; I tend to be a little picky cause being english a language I learned at school, I had to learn a lot of spelling. This fanfiction was a pleasure to read, the end was so simple, short but full at the same time. Stories like this really makes my day, Thanks for writing! Could you believe, yesterday I came from my final exam of the from the college (this term is harder than the previous ones, I have two groups of examns, the first are a month and a half after the begging of this term, and then come the finals), the thing ois yesterday was y last and most difficult exam, I think it went right and then came and started reading your story cause it was next in line. That was about 5 pm and kept on reading till 4am this morning XD. I has to sleep cause today was mothers day here in Perú and we were going out. Then we arrived home at 8pm and now 9:58pm I'm saying good bye cause tomorrow I have classes at 10 am and I'm a HEAVY sleeper. Lot of candies and cookies for you! Have a god day! (See how happy you made me?)
Zashera 2008-01-05 ch 14,	abuseBeautiful...
Iscatian 2007-11-18 ch 14,	abuseTaht was sweet. But you should have had more romance, much more! =P Other than that, great. Like the pairing. =D
FlameTwirler 2007-09-04 ch 1,	abuseThis really is a lovely series. ^_^
asian-baka 2007-07-20 ch 14,	abuseWow...that last chapter was so amazing. Those words were so well written. I'm literally blown away. This was soo good. I don't know what else to say but wow...that last chapter is goin' down in the history book.
machineface 2007-06-10 ch 14,	abusexD A cute story although not nearly as good as the first one rahh [no, not an insult to your writing skillz, the first one was just REALLY good]. I wish there was more Gaara Sakura action though. :C
Jester08 2007-04-30 ch 14,	abuseAnother awesome story!! I think your a great romantic writer!! Keep up the good work on your other stories!! ^_^
MangaOtaku21 2007-03-17 ch 14,	abusehehe, I didn't know there was a sequel o.o I loved it ^.^ again, I just like reviewing good stories, yours are very very good. ^_^ XD I still want to read the others, but I'm not much online XP but you will get some other reviews form me :evil laughter: if you want, of course ^_^ (what author doesn't want reviews, I don't know, but just in case... O.o)
CephiedNoMiko 2007-03-17 ch 14,	abuseI love this fic, I love GaaSaku paring, and I love your style. It's beautiful. Epilogue is brilliant. It's the best fic which I read whenever. Sorry for my english.
fairybitch 2007-03-09 ch 14, anon.	abuseI just read both sections of your story and it was awesome! I love the way you presented the plot and the way you kept the characters pretty much in character! Also how in About: Time you did the flashback scenes every other chapter, very nice! I do have just one question (okay so it's two), what was the kazekage's mission for Gaara and what was going on between Tamari and the kazekage? Anywas, keep up the excellent work kay!? GOOD!
I love gaasaku 2007-02-21 ch 3, anon.	abuseWait...who is benji? Is he related to sakura and...why do they all live together? I am really confused!
geckogirl 2007-02-20 ch 14,	abuseThat story went by so fast for me, sadly, I wish there was more, because you wrote it so well.And the epilogue was absolutely beautiful.Thank you so much for writing this...quickly, Have you ever thought of writing an original story that you would publish? IF not you should, I am and its tons of fun.
Sora Inu-chan 2007-02-09 ch 14,	abusetears Aw, this was so awesome. ^^
Kyla45 2007-02-04 ch 14,	abusebravo, bravo, bravo! I absolutely loved this!!

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