this is an awsome stroy. i hope you post soon. i cant wait to see what happens next.

Nice Fic! keep it up! :D

Peace, F.D.

wow...that was cool i loved the animal thregth thing update soon!

Awesome! Hahaa... Beast Boy... *shakes head*. I really like the new power that Beast Boy got. It's awesome! Please keep writing! Update soon!
Over and out,
~StarryTian

hehe i liked the way you showed the emotions!

:lol: The Anaconda-around-Raven-emotion-and-then-Raven-emotion-using-it-in-a-perverted-way theme NEVER gets old.

Still, the key to a good story is to start slowly, until you build up enough suspense, supposibly kill off a character, and then at the end reveal that the character never really died, in what author's like to call a 'plot bunny'. (That's basically what happens in every single fic here... Why stand against the wave when you can ride it?)

Still, more desribtive text around the dialouge. You know what the message the text want's to convay is, you just have to make sure WE get to know what the message is. Sometimes it's hard, yeah, but with practice it's worth it, and it really shows, too!

~ Tai

Nothing to wrong with this. Still, for example, things like:

“My Emotions want to see you again,” Raven replied.

“That’s okay I want the original,”

“Thanks, but your still going in the mirror,”

“Okay Fine,”

Should be more like:

"My emotions want to see you again," Raven replyed cautiously, remember what happened the last time Beast Boy had found his way into her mirror.

"That's okay..." Beast Boy sad, before pulling Raven closer to himself. "But I prefer the original."

Failing to hide a blush, Raven pushed him away slightly, "Thanks..." Beast Boy gave her one of his goofy smiles, "But you're still going in the mirror."

The smile didn't falter. "Okay... fine."

Yeah. or something to that extent. It really boosts your word count, and that's a good thing here... More words = More reviews, most of the time.

~ Tai

Okay... Hm...

I think that BB and Rae got together way to early, but that's just me. Or, it could be that my mom's constant love movies have left a twisted interpritation on romance in my mind, but I digress...

Once again, more desriptive text needed, but it's not all that important.

Spelling is 100% A-ok, no problemo with that...

Welp, off to the next chapter! *Zolo music playing* Away!

Hello!

Okay, A few grammer mistakes, but no big, those are easily corrected =^_^=

Here's what you should put in you summary: (Just changing the text, not the idea.)

Beast Boy is loosing control to the Beast Within. Is there anything his friends can do? Is there anything he can do? RaeBB RobStar.

Okay... H/o...

Maybe a little more text and less dialouge, And when BB does the whole 'don't get angry' deal, make some of it in italics for thoughts...

Okay, Helpful author-friend time done here... Off to the next chapter! *runs off into the sunset, never to be seen again, for about five minutes*

~Tai