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Reviews for: Kingdom Hearts: Final Confrontation - Page 1 of 8
Destiny777
2009-12-07 . chapter 69
I have been reading this story for quite a while now, still nowhere near the end, but I love long stories ^^
I especially like chapter; "The Magic Mirror"

You write so detailed and with a nice style too, the story never gets boring.

There is no way that I have the time to review all chapters, since there are simply too many.
But You're one of my favorite authors, and in my opinion you write exceptionally well.
I have a similar writing style to yours, but still not that detailed, I'm not that patient xD

I really hope to read more of your stories ^^ you have my support.
AgatsumaKatomeiChan
2009-11-28 . chapter 1
Hello Cavendish! I discovered your stories about 2 years ago (perhaps longer) and have been looking over them ever since. Granted i havent read *cough* most of it (>.> if it was a book, thatd be different) but this one - Lord knows when i read of Riku's death i was crying in front of everybody in the room. Its really very touching, the end to your series is just as so. The Final Epic story is well written and very moving. I think even though its best to take critisism to mind, dont take such negative critisism too heavily to heart - this is a VERY good story, and u are a VERY good author - and i dont think its a bad thing AT ALL to write a long story. How many of the writers of these reviews do u think are fans of the book series Twilight, eh? The Final Epic is a wonderful story, and i will finish it one day! I wish you well, and the best future in writing ^.^

~*.^Konbabwa, Cavendish-san^.*~ :P
no1inparticular
2009-09-13 . chapter 1
Hi!
Discovered you a LONG time ago back in .
I've read your stories bunches of times, & I think they're pretty good!
Keep writing & drawing!!
Fyrflame
2009-08-04 . chapter 1
So, um can someone PLEASE explain to me why this person has written one the longest stories this site can boast, and yet he has only 109 (110 now) reviews? Personnally, i haven't read the story yet, and im gonna get working on that, but i want to salute you on your dedication to your writing, cause frankly...damn...1,341,453 words...thats really just...wow. so im gonna get to reading this LONG ass story now.
Mat49324
2009-07-23 . chapter 1
You get this because that son of a bithc moterfoker Rozen in her otrhers identinties like Kiseky Lyn and phantominvader flamed a me and called me a terrible writer! But you deserve it becuase you are terrible writer!

It is horrible. You're a loser with a lame life for writing this. your chapters are too long and too boring. Read and review my story "The get togheters?" so you can see what a real writer can do. If you're smart enough and can find my story that is BITCH.

LOSER
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Tell that bastard Rozen to stop Flaming a me with her oter indentinties or I'll flame all peoples related to her in even the smallerest ways!

And you can't report a me! Anon flames are Safe and I will tell I didn't do it Bitch and my frienda Angel Wings-008 Will proterct me and believe what I say!
SirHenryMF
2008-08-31 . chapter 3
Nice chapter Now off to Oceanburg!
Coonass
2008-06-18 . chapter 145
Longest fic on this site, most likely. I salute you. Only 106 reviews for all the hard work you put into this.
Pyis
2007-12-31 . chapter 145
It was a great story!
Word Nazi
2007-12-26 . chapter 1
Dude, I'm looking for like, the LONGEST fanfic on here, just out of boredom and curiosity, but hey, I am DEFINITELY going to have to set aside some time to read this. I can't even IMAGINE how long you must have worked on this. Haven't even read this chapter though... I have a book I need to finish reading... but I don't feel like reading at the moment, so I'm going to go see if there's anyone who can break your record of 1,341,453 words. The closest was a pokemon story with 900,072. lol, anyway's can't wait to read this! It's going to take me weeks probably... so much for finding another fanfic longer than this a few minutes ago, but now I really am... tata!
avatard/narutard/kingdom heart
2007-12-17 . chapter 145
This is the most incredible fanfiction I have ever read. I have read all of your stories but this is my first review for them. The closing paragraph to this story was brilliant with the return of the charm. Thank you so much for writing this!
Wings of Avalon
2007-12-16 . chapter 145
*sighs, several tears leaking from my eyes* That was wonderful. I first became of fan of yours by reading your just completed ending of the Third Epic. It spurred me on to reading all three parts of that, and now following you through Final Confrontation from its very beginning. Not many words can express your writing; it is epic, minutely detailed, romantic in places, tragic, and true to its characters. Myself, along with other faithful fans, are all truly sorry to see the end of your stories...maybe a better word would be epic novels.

As Keiko105 pointed out, we were there together to mourn the loss of Riku and his leap back into life, Riku and Ophelia's whirlwind romance, the reuniting and separation of Cunla and Cuchulain, Kirin's quest to find Kairi, the enevitable battle between Sirius and Riku, and all of the side stories and little details that made every chapter worth waiting for a.k.a. bringing Ophelia back to Riku at the very end.

So in conclusion, wonderful, absolutely fantastic story. Please continue to write, as you are a wonderful author - as anyone who has ever read your work can attest to. And not just fanfiction - your art is amazing in itself as well. So from all of us fans to you, thanks!
Keiko105
2007-12-16 . chapter 145
Man,that was awesome.I'm really sad its over...Guess what,though?Now you have a mess load of fans to keep writing a new story for! =^^=...*goes away to re-read* Good greif,longest fan-fic to ever exist...Kinda weird to think all the way back to the beginning of The Third Epic...(just two years ago,I was crying over the death of Riku..)You really did a wonderful job.Keep writing something!
Raxivace
2007-12-16 . chapter 41
I've only read up to here so far, and I've got to say it has been AWESOME!

41 down, 104 to go.
nupinoop296
2007-12-15 . chapter 145
I...wow. Absolutely increible, sir. I want to say more...but I don't know what...
Wings of Avalon
2007-12-09 . chapter 144
I knew it! I knew it! Ophelia and Cuchulain came back! I was waiting...and waiting...and waiting - so thank you so much for making it a happy ending for everyone. Riku deserves to have his own happiness, after all of the trouble in his life. Cunla too with his father. I see you haven't completed the story yet, so is there an epilogue? As always, you are a creative and wonderful writer. Considering how long and time consuming your stories are, you are probably one of the most undervalued writers here. Congratulations again on a wonderful story - and thanks again for bringing back Ophelia and Cuchulain!
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