Aww *sniffle*. Sad but really good written.

Interesting. Somewhat confusing at times, but I liked the story. I liked how Carter's kiss allowed Lucy to go home, intot he light. Very bittersweet. The poem is a nice effect. Elizabeth

awww..that is sad! I love it, though, really sweet...:)

Great story. Very touching.

I really liked this story, but one question. Was it by any chance inspired by Sixth Sense?