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MorvernDamned
2008-05-10 . chapter 5
I love your story =^.^=

Please contiune
Spork Weilding Canary Of Doom
2007-08-26 . chapter 5
Was the dancing thing about Lestat dancing with the woman's corpse from Interview With The Vampire? Sorreh, that's just what it made me think of when I watched the movie and I read that part and was like O_O ohmigosh...

Anyways, this is lovely. Your little excerpts are most triumphant!
Minako
2007-01-03 . chapter 5
I really like it because your writing the story adding new thing and you put that part on Kei's bedroom that they didn't put on the film but is ok i really want to read the next so please write it soon

See ya ;)
Rinoa_Yuna
2006-05-07 . chapter 5
This is by far the best fanfic of Moon Child that I have come across --so far-- on this site. It runs very smoothly and fits in perfectly with the scenes from the film. Great opening. Keep it up! ^__^
emikoxchan
2006-05-02 . chapter 2
75, older than old... hehehe
Carapheonix
2006-01-28 . chapter 5
Hey, just wanted to Review to make sure you didn't forget about this story again. It's not often you get to read good Moon Child fics so I think it's awesome that I finally found another one.. I've found so few that it was kinda sad. ^.^" But if you continue to Update this one then I'll be occupied with it. Swear.
vampirelf
2005-12-11 . chapter 5
I really like your writing style, and the way you use Kei's perspective. I don't think you have to have the dialogue and events pinned down to the movie, though I don't mind much. I'd much rather read the other stuff you write though... I like how you put an extra spin to things. I also like that you put in the extra scene with the fish tank - well done. I really think this deserves so many more reviews... it's so well written.
Shin
2005-12-10 . chapter 5
I love it so far, I don't care for reading the movie line-by-line though. It gets a little annoying. However, it's good, and I loved how you add little extra's here and there. (especially the camera test. I had just recently watched that) Keep up the great work!
Jael Noir
2005-11-12 . chapter 4
This is a wonderful story! You should update more often! You haven't updated it in like, two months. I can't wait for the next chapter! People should make more Moonchild Fanfics. Lol. Anyways, keep up the good work and don't leave me without the rest of the story! ^^
Hagane_no_angel
2005-08-31 . chapter 2
Very nice story you have here. Please, don't be like other people I know (aka me XD) and leave this unfinished. I really like this story. Please update soon! ^^
zeli
2005-08-29 . chapter 2
I've been waiting for someone to write a fic like this :D Keep writing!
19
2005-08-28 . chapter 2
A Good story!! Update soon! ^^
Tixxana
2005-08-25 . chapter 1
You posted this at LJ? Really? Where? Well, anyway, I really liked it a lot. You filled in the parts that they don't show in the movie and you did a great job of it. Update soon!
18
2005-08-23 . chapter 1
Hey! Like your story a lot, it's realy intresting^^ hope you update soon!! =D
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