It's always great to see fics that are not only kei/naru, but actually well written. It'd be great to see more of this fic, so thanks!

Its been a little over a year now. I think this story is dead:(

shame, it had promise.

this is an awesome story dude! there r too many KeiMot fanfictions. That really sux for a licensed Motoko hater such as myself. -_- i wish there were more KeiNar fanfictions! Naru is my favorite character in LH! update soon, or ull be sorry!

more...more...more!

that was cool! not nearly as scary as the Blind Love thing this other dude made (whose name i forget) ur not being mean to Keitaro because everyone suspected as much that something like this would happen... but why do all the good stories have to end when it was just getting good?! oh well, anyway, I'm going crazy over here because i still cant send in work! i wish for you to check out my work (when i finally get something up) and i wish for you to continue this story before i ttally lose it! :3 hehe, buhbye!

hey, ur gonna update soon?

Hm...Keitaro x Motoko fics are running rampant. Nice C-C-C-C-Combo Breaker.

Oh my freakin god this rocks my world! This story is one of the best I've read. Please update!

Oh, the whole "Naru... my love..." thing was a bit TOO cheesy/hokey/corny/much for being so soon in the story. I mean, he hadn't ever confessed to her before this, unless you want to add in some background info, so even if he is drugged, why would he say that? Other than that, great story. UPDATE IT DARN YOU!

Shows promise! There are a fair few of these 'Keitaro gets severly hurt' fics.. but a lot of 'em turn out to be tat!!

this definatly shows promise.
Can't wait for the next update!

Good first chapter. Please update this story soon.

As far as Kei/Naru fics go. I'll read almost any Love Hina pairing. True, there has been an overflow of Kei/Mot. storys as of late.

I read your fic, and I think it is great so far...for the most part...

I agree with what you said about all the Motoko/Kei fics out there. There are just too many of them. I think many people hate Naru because they can't understand where she's coming from. And if they have anyone to blame for Keitaro and Naru being together, then they should blame the creator, Akamatsu-san. Ironically, they would be dissing Love Hina in its entirety, though...

One of the reasons why I also like Keitaro/Naru pairing is because I know where Keitaro comes from. I know what its like to fantasize about being with a girl that seems to be out of your reach, even though in reality, they may not be...

Hope you continue and update soon...

wow i can't say anything i'm totally speachless

This sounds a little like my story "Blind Love". I'm pretty sure you've read it, although mine put Keitaro in a much more further position. Not bad though.

Damn, this story is GREAT! Awesome premise, and the feeling of this chapter...wow. You've got my support with this story, since I, too, am violently sick of the Keitaro/Motoko pairings and everyone saying "NARU'S A **, NARU NEEDS TO DIE." I'm definitely putting this on my favorites!

Naru/Keitaro sucks!! Bo!! Heh heh, just kidding. I love Keitaro/Naru pairings. I think this will be a pretty interesting story. It seems just like Keitaro to not blame anybody for anything so he wouldn't think Naru is at fault. I do wonder how well Naru takes not hurting Keitaro and blaming herslef for hurting Keitaro before. Well Update soon and Good work.