good job. continue soon. even thought it says final chapter.

I'm sorry but I just don't get it still! Who are Jessica and Maggie? And why would a blind person drive! BLIND PEOPLE CANT DRIVE!

Ok this is really confusing! Thomas Lambe is Thomas Winter? Or is there another Thomas? Marshal is the father? Mr.Lambe is the Uncle? There are some things you really to explain. You said Thomas Lambe was FBI agent Thomas Winter and then there was Marshal Winter?Are they related?

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i like this story, update soon!

Cute. Write more! I loved the London Bridge part!

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