that was really good. It makes sense to me too. (cries for Dark and Krad)

I never really understood the ending though... So Dark sealed away Krad and himself, but is he going to come the next generation?

I'd always thought that he was gone forever, but then I remember that Daiki (grandfather) told Saehara's dad about the same events that happened 40 years ago?

E-E! *Squee's until computer screen shatters* ...oops... *fixes* Um... that was GREAT! WEHO! Yeah, I'm a weird one. I know. BUT I LOVED THAT!! Neh why must all good storys be oneshots...? And this is coming from a person who cannot write a oneshot at all, always writes long ones. Meditation is actually PART of a big story (that isn't written yet...) so e!
-Wd

Funny story. I was looking through this section again and I saw this and thought "Hey, this fic looks familiar". Well I saw the author and I thought, "duh". Then I read it again...and now I'm depressed. yeah, yeah, celebrate your victory...

See you tomorrow...

:-)

Ooh la la! Sehr nett, if you don't mind me slipping out of English. The imagery was nicely executed, I think I actually found some literary devices in there!1 (w00t. I think I need more use of those...) I have to say that I favored Krad's circumstance over Dark's slightly, because it just seems to me that he is the one that deserves it. I mean, the murderer carrying the cross is now shone his just punishment. Dark it seemed to me was slightly less deserving, though both the discription od Satoshi and of Daisuke I thought were wonderful. Again, I have to note the imagery.
Very well done. In my opinion, short = good, and one-shots rock my socks, so this was awesome. (HARDXCORE!) ...Ciao.

Yes! Whoo-hoo! Torture them! Ha ha ha!

Er...sorry. Some of us enjoy our authoress powers of torture, don't we? (Does anyone have any idea what I just said? Cause I don't...)

Hey, this was great, if not a little short.

~ K-chan

that was beautiful! wow...

it's so...sad...

well anyways good story!

*covers mouth* Oh... Krad! Dark! how could they do this to you?! *turns away*

Amazing writing skills. This is one of the few fanfiction that made me feel sympathy for the characters portrayed.

Interesting...I like...