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OMG. YOU HAVE NEVER SEEN DOCTOR WHO! YOUR LIFE IS INCOMPLETE! IT IS THE BEST SHOW EVER! Although I agree with you, Torchwood is fantasic. But Doctor Who still rules supreme.
And I should probably be reviewing the fic now. But still, you have really never seen Doctor Who! Poor you.
Okay, Great fic! Loving it so far! Especially Rans reaction to the murder, and the fourth wall. Aand the Shinichi going crazy and taking over the world bit (He'll have to beat me to it)! Update soon, and keep up the good work. And watch Doctor Who. You should start with modern Who. You know 2005 to now. Classic, well theres a LOT more classic. Over 50 series. And not many people know anything about them if they know of thei existant at all. I only know because I am quote 'The craziest, most obsessed, know it all I know. Apart from me' unquote. A direct quote from one of my best friends. Who ironically enough is equally as obsessed about Torchwood. I have yet to meet someone as crazy about The Sarah Jane Adventures. Like Torchwood I love it but I prefer Doctor Who.
I'm rambling arn't I. Any way, to summerise.
Great fic! Update soon! Watch Doctor Who!

I'd read the first few chapters of this a while back (read: ages ago) and I'd been re-reading that Heiji and Shinichi thing you'd done earlier, wondered about anything more recent... found this again. And spent almost all the time laughing my head off. I especially liked the constant references to Fourth Wall Breakage.

I was wondering when a murder would happen, you know. I'm sure you can make it funny somehow, too.

Heiji will use a bokken to knock down that fourth wall for you if you'd like.

'LOL WUT' haha i always say that on /b/.

You really are the most amazing, and the most hilarious writer on here. I've been cracking up during each and every chapter.

I am now officially the department's resident lunatic. It will take a lifetime before I rectify that impression. I LOL'd the HARDEST at the duct-taped fourth wall, not to mention that darn movie title. Can anyone be so freakin' obvious?! XDXD

I seriously can't believe you're only pretending to be funny! PLEASE update soon! *dies*

Hmm, this seems really promising! I'll definitely continue reading! :D

A MURDER CASE. I can't wait!

This is funny XD

The World War thing was so funny!

Of course, what day wouldn't be complete without a musder investigation to end it? Hear the sarcasm? Update!

King Mickey would like his weapon back.

XD I loved the references. LOL.

And LOL'd at the LOLCAT. XD

Ah... Amazing chapter! Hilarious!

Now, how to keep people from getting suspicious, due to the body-swap? I'm sure that hilarity shall ensue, even when you write a murder. XD


You know you're around this sort of thing too long when you recognize the "I just found a body" scream. XD

LOL @ the OBLIGATORY CAMEO thing.

And the 'legal age of consent' conversation. XD And the 'marry a detective' thing. XD

Omg, somewhere inbetween the TARDIS in the stove, Lolcat randomness, and Heiji's assult on the forth wall I about lost it... Lol!

Great work, I can't wait to see how the murder will come out ^^

Haha, full of craziness. Now, I'm interested in seeing you write this murder fic. Good luck and may the gods or muses or whatever of fanfic-writing be with you.

Thanks for the update and hoping for another soon.

~K~(@)