I find him easy to follow (hope that does not make me a kindred spirit) though heady to stomach, but then, this is Farfarello. Will the other Schwarz reflect on him, or do you plan to write the entire fic from his POV?

Looking forward to the next instalment.

Cheers
LH

this sounds like it could be awesomely interesting. looking for the next installation.

This has the begininngs of something magnificient! I'm serious, you have Farfarello down quite well and nicely. I'm anxious to see what else might be coming up and where your ideas are headed. Schwarz is my all time favorite, though I will occasionally read Weiß. Keep up the good work!