WOOHOO! Go WILLY WONKA!! THis is a rather funny fic. PLease update soon. I would rate this story a 9.9 out of 10

ThE wOmP lOvEr

This is very interesting story, well-written, intriguing and very Wonkaish, I hope you you'll continue it one day, and meanwhile I have a question: in your profile on and on your deviantART page you say you're a "Robotnik Freak". I was wondering if this "Robotnik" has anything to do with Polish word for "worker"?
Anyway, I'm looking forward to next chapter and also new pics, you're really great!:)
B.

HI! Im the son of your art teacher MR.Flores we were checking out your FIC and I decided to review, I have to say your FIC and it sounds very original and its almost like it came from the writing of ROALD DAHL, so keep up the good work!^_^

Hooray for another great chapter! I loved the interraction between Willy and Charlie's family, especially Mrs. Bucket making a huge fuss over Willy's head, and Willy just wanting the attention to go away. It will be amusing to see how Willy handles his trip to town.

aw...willy's so sweet! I love how your onka charecter! I lso LOVE your story PLEASE update! =D

Alana: Never had a girl dentist, we got a guy checking howers ^^

Evo: yep!

Haha great chapter. :) poor Mr. Wonka!

Pretty good. Some english grammatical errors, but I think it's ok since it's not your first language. :) Please write more soon!

Aw, Willy cried!

*sobs in sympathy*

Beautiful chapter, wonderfully written.

More please!

M.A.

Oh dear, oh dear, I hope you write the next chapter soon! I looked at the reviews, and realized I hadn't reviewed this! Imagine my shock! "I shall bite upon my hand in self-punishment!" I said aloud, and so did. So I ust now go to bandage my battered and bruised and bitten hand, but the next chapter better be here by the time I get back!

Alana: heh cute!

Evo: XD

Aww, great... dear Mr Wonka!

HoVis

Aw. Liked this a lot! I love that Dr Wonka is an old softy really and that you haven't made him abusive (unlike a lot of other authors).

And of course, Wonka dancing in the elevator is always a plus. ;-)

Please continue!

Whee, I'm adding this to my alerts list. Apart from a few spelling and grammar errors, it's a delightful read.

Good story