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| Xiilnek 2006-04-12 ch 1, | abuseAmazing. Amazing and simply wonderful. I love this. You write his voice so cleverly, implying important bits and just saying other things, expressing thoughts and feelings in a voice that is so clearly Willy Wonka's... Excelent allusions to his experiances with Dr. Wonka, and the feelings are expressed so well with just a few words. Wow. Yay. |
| Decollage 2005-08-29 ch 1, | abuseOh. Poor Willy... I've always kinda wondered why he didn't press charges. Wonderfully written, dispite the short-ish-ness. (Which suits it, by the way) |
| Lizard Pie 2005-08-29 ch 1, | abuse^.^ fun working the flash backs in! |
| Sherrrry 2005-08-27 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed being inside of Wonka's twisted mind for a moment or two. Thanks! |
| Telanu 2005-08-27 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot--I'd never thought about Wonka this way, feeling personally betrayed by the people who by all rights *ought* to understand him, but instead take advantage of him. It makes sense, and is a perspective I was glad to get! |
| Agent A.T. 2005-08-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was twisted. A little bit anyway. It was still great. |
| almostinsane 2005-08-24 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! |
| Valerie Phoenixfire 2005-08-24 ch 1, | abuseAw, that was a wonderful one-shot! Willy was captured very well. I love the bit about him wanting to be a cacao plant. Very much like him. This is great. ^-^ |
| whylime 2005-08-23 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. You really got the tone of the new movie down in essence. Plus I totally think Willy Wonka deep down wished he was a cacao plant |