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Reviews For: Let's See the Damage

Xiilnek
2006-04-12
ch 1,
abuseAmazing. Amazing and simply wonderful. I love this. You write his voice so cleverly, implying important bits and just saying other things, expressing thoughts and feelings in a voice that is so clearly Willy Wonka's... Excelent allusions to his experiances with Dr. Wonka, and the feelings are expressed so well with just a few words. Wow. Yay.
Decollage
2005-08-29
ch 1,
abuseOh. Poor Willy... I've always kinda wondered why he didn't press charges. Wonderfully written, dispite the short-ish-ness. (Which suits it, by the way)
Lizard Pie
2005-08-29
ch 1,
abuse^.^ fun working the flash backs in!
Sherrrry
2005-08-27
ch 1,
abuseI enjoyed being inside of Wonka's twisted mind for a moment or two. Thanks!
Telanu
2005-08-27
ch 1,
abuseI like this a lot--I'd never thought about Wonka this way, feeling personally betrayed by the people who by all rights *ought* to understand him, but instead take advantage of him. It makes sense, and is a perspective I was glad to get!
Agent A.T.
2005-08-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was twisted. A little bit anyway. It was still great.
almostinsane
2005-08-24
ch 1,
abuseGreat story!
Valerie Phoenixfire
2005-08-24
ch 1,
abuseAw, that was a wonderful one-shot!

Willy was captured very well. I love the bit about him wanting to be a cacao plant. Very much like him.

This is great. ^-^
whylime
2005-08-23
ch 1,
abuseGreat story. You really got the tone of the new movie down in essence. Plus I totally think Willy Wonka deep down wished he was a cacao plant
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