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| jimra 2008-04-05 ch 10,  | abuseGood fic, all in all. Very funny with the underlying sexual tension themes. I did, however, seem rushed toward the end. |
| Lerris 2008-03-17 ch 10, | abuseThis started pretty good, and I suppose to an extent certain things are a matter of taste, but I find the largest issue with this story the fact that it doesn't take itself seriously enough. Slapstick is fine, but it just seems to me that for best results some of the fourth wall needs left intact. Still, all in all, it was an enjoying read. |
| jusenkyo ruler 2007-12-29 ch 10, | abusemake a sequel |
| cabrera1234 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abusenice story. |
| BlackRoseFire 2007-04-25 ch 10, | abusevery very funny. please continue to write. |
| Vilkath 2007-04-10 ch 2, | abuseoh my god.. to funny. I dont' know what is funnier, Hap putting the amazon secret techniques on the internet, or Minako training rewards. Logical methods to get Ranma up to par with normal Cannon events, but also so very funny. |
| brindani 2007-02-19 ch 10, | abuseThough everyone is displayed quite out of character, you have managed to do so to personify specific traits to make for a very entertaining piece of work. Excellent, brindani |
| Senile old fogey 2007-01-25 ch 10, anon. | abuse...it finished? *clicks in a vain attempt to magically make chapter 11* You got to continue this, it was absolutely hilarious...Always nice to see something from you. |
| Cardinel 2006-12-16 ch 10, | abuseDude, this story was a laugh riot, one of the funniest stories I've ever read in my lifetime. The one thing that makes me sad? theres no sequals! I want to see advisor Ranma in all senshi adventures! Will Luna succeed in seducing him and having Diana? will the outer senshi fall for him too? what about Al and Anne? (Al wouldn't care, but Anne, being female, would), That wierd season with the circus tent base full of enemies (Cant remember name, sorry)? The black moon family? Galaxia? That whole wierd pegasus saga with Rini? I want to learn what happens, and since you made this one, I figure you once again can gather your strength for another comedy crossover slamfest. P.S My muses like your story too, They want me to get a pet cat now. |
| Duff-Duff 2006-09-29 ch 3, | abusenice |
| Black Dragon6 2006-08-18 ch 6, | abuse"You stole my lesbians!" XD It's been a long time since I've laughed that hard. This is priceless. Moving a bit shakily without all the details and whatnot, but the humor is solid. Good one! |
| I am the Bane of my Sword 2006-07-26 ch 10, | abuseThis is better than your angel thingy... it's funnier. |
| Lykii 2006-07-17 ch 10, | abuseThis was really funny! I absolutely loved it. You should definitely do more stuff like that. |
| Ryo Oh Ki7 2006-06-14 ch 10, | abuseIn the Negaverse, the lone koala quickly took control, being the most intelligent being within that dimension at the moment. As such, if it was possible, it would have smiled as his loyal subjects brought yet another eucalyptus youma for it to consume. One day, it promised it would thank the angry one for bringing it here. LOL... The laughs keep coming mate, although it's now nigh impossible to figure out who's after who and in which form :(It's almost like you thought Ranma 1/2 wasn't confusing enough ;-) |
| Gundum M 2006-06-04 ch 10, | abusedidn't see that comeing. Some of the omakes were really ejoyable. loved the fic |