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| Firelit Dragon 2006-05-02 ch 1, | abuseNice story Caddyl. I enjoyed it very much. The white dress symbolizes Ryou very well I think. And the characters are nicely IC. Nicely written! ~Firelit Dragon |
| go-yaffa 2006-01-25 ch 1, | abuse:arielle: so sad sob sob sob poor ryou i like ryou hehehehheheheehehhee he's my favourite character :ayla: i like bakura not ryou ... but now that my hikari is crying i'd better comfort her and not bakura... |
| Raelyn-Mage 2005-09-12 ch 1, | abusethat was short and well...seemed very wierd...almost nutty prfessor like with bakura forgetting his own wedding and yeah...wierd as hell |
| marina-senpai 2005-08-26 ch 1, anon. | abusegood girl caddyl-chan *pats her head* you changed the whole forehead to the chest good girl ^_^ |
| Imaginary-Dream 2005-08-26 ch 1, | abuseMana: -sniffle- sniffle sniffle- -sniff- Imani: Oh for Ra's sake just cry already. Mana: -sniffle sniffle cry- Wah! T.T Amana: Bakura-meanie...-cries also- Mena: -locked in a closet, crying- Mana: Por Ryou! -cry- Imani: -.- I'm surronded by crying fools...aww man there's something in my eye...-rubs eye- T.o; |
| swdewleaf 2005-08-25 ch 1, | abuseHello, StormroseDewleaf here. (I have two accounts, my dad would freak if he caught me writing yaoi, so I created one he doesn't know about.) Wonderful fic! It almost made me cry. You just CAN'T leave this as a one-shot!! ~RoseOfTempest~ |
| Hikari Riku 2005-08-25 ch 1, | abuse**...now I'm crying!! but I'm probably crying for other reasons as well... |
| CuriousLittleBird 2005-08-24 ch 1, | abuseI like this story--it's short and to the point, yet it has some very gripping emotions. Ryou does get a little PMS-y in the story, but hey, it's his wedding day and the groom doesn't show! It makes sense, in other words. Oh, and I *heart* the last lines: "The hem of my dress was in tatters. Just like my heart." Perfect ending for this story. |
| Baka no Kenta 2005-08-24 ch 1, | abuseSo is this one of those stories where a guy turns into a girl? |