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| Roses of Sharon 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseOh, wow. This is just, wow, amazing. It's like, ohmyfreakin'gosh amazing. I love the ending. I love the beginning. I love the middle. But I think I love the ending the most. Shino, right? Amazing. I have nothing more to say. |
| avasion 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abusethat was so sad. and beautiful. |
| Ceirwy 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseWow... The poetic feel of it leaves me breathless. And the second person pov is very poignant. |
| calliopechild 2007-04-29 ch 1, | abuseThis is an amazing oneshot. I loved it. It was really well-written, and the whole premise of it was really neat. The sadness of it hit home, and I love what you had him say at the end. Excellent job, very deep and touching. Kudos, and arigatou for a great read. |
| TawakeNix 2007-01-22 ch 1, | abuseThat was… I don't know… a 'something' |
| acacias 2007-01-19 ch 1, | abuseI am speechless. And that's saying something, for a writer. Although it doesn't seem like crack to me. More like heart-wrenching. |
| lily23 2006-11-19 ch 1, | abuseOh my god. That was so sad and so awesome. |
| the blanket 2006-08-25 ch 1, | abuseI've only started watching Naruto, and I haven't watched any of the episodes with Shino in them so this is all vew to me. I really enjoy the way you put this piece together. It's quite obvious how careful you are when you're choosing words because they do what they're supposed to do: lead the reader to a new point. This was soft, lovely and warm. |
| Calimora 2006-08-05 ch 1, | abuseI am crying. |
| Sado-Dentist 2006-04-16 ch 1, | abusesjfhasjeywuiahfjsdkfhasjhdjhfuwyeurishfjshdfjhwueyruwyer Holy **!! I can't believe how good that was. Shino is the **. Way to go. |
| Monna Sakura 2006-03-28 ch 1, | abuseThat was cool. |
| Fairady 2006-03-20 ch 1, | abuseWow. I'm at a loss of words here. This is so short and yet so powerful. I love the POV, and the bit about a legend dying unkown. Thank you so much for posting this, I really enjoyed reading it. |
| Syngamy 2006-03-07 ch 1, | abuseYou wrote Shino very well. I love how you can convey so much emotion with so little words. |
| deity of death1 2006-01-03 ch 1, | abuse...I'm speechless. You did great!! |
| IroasetaKotoba 2006-01-02 ch 1, | abuseMind blowing... that was really sad. And yes, sadly, it's rare to find Shino related fanfics... |