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Hmm...I left wondering if I missed something that should have been obvious. It didnt seem confusing at all to me. Enjoyed it greatly, although I wish you had kept writing it to when the rest of the team gets there, but, heh, I wish you added more chapters to all your stories ive read so far.

Great chapter!

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oh... so sad...
even if it is sad, it was also very well written. great story.

Wow.

Very good, and that's a killer last line.

beautiful...In every way I can imagine, thios is simply beutiful.

No! *sobs* That is awful...no...why did I read this? I saw the name Shino and I just had to check it out. *sobs harder* No!

T_T I just wanted to check out your page...

Talk to you later perhaps. And update your other fanfiction asap. (the middle ground)

Otherwise I'll stop telling people to read it. (No I won't it's too good to keep quiet about)

Oh, wow. This is just, wow, amazing. It's like, ohmyfreakin'gosh amazing.

I love the ending. I love the beginning. I love the middle. But I think I love the ending the most. Shino, right?

Amazing.

I have nothing more to say.

that was so sad. and beautiful.

Wow... The poetic feel of it leaves me breathless. And the second person pov is very poignant.

This is an amazing oneshot. I loved it. It was really well-written, and the whole premise of it was really neat. The sadness of it hit home, and I love what you had him say at the end. Excellent job, very deep and touching. Kudos, and arigatou for a great read.

That was… I don't know… a 'something'

I am speechless. And that's saying something, for a writer. Although it doesn't seem like crack to me. More like heart-wrenching.

Oh my god. That was so sad and so awesome.

I've only started watching Naruto, and I haven't watched any of the episodes with Shino in them so this is all vew to me.

I really enjoy the way you put this piece together. It's quite obvious how careful you are when you're choosing words because they do what they're supposed to do: lead the reader to a new point.

This was soft, lovely and warm.

I am crying.