OMG, This is great! ^_^ I love how you did Atemu((NOT JACK!)), you made him so kind hearted!

Very interesting! I really want to see what happens next!

GR8 so far!

Told you I would be back to review, and I still think it's a good story so far.

And Duke is a nice villain, has that mafia like feeling to him with the control the mayor and threating the village.

Keep it up, and I'll be back to review again.

Demino.

It is awesome!

Good chapter, really nice to read. Not really any complaints about the story so far.

Didn't see any grammer or spelling mistakes anywhere, which made it even nicer to read.

Keep up the good work now and I'll be back to review again.