hey, just wanted you to know that i have read this story 3 times by other authors...so, i'm not sure who is copying who unless you were doing a collaboration with someone...

Aw, I always loved Mugen/Fuu, and I could totally imagine this scene in my head. It was cute moment. xD I squealed like the fangirl I am. Great job. :]

SHEER GENIUS! ^_^ Sorry, it's just that...WOW. I haven't read such an awesome Fuugen in days, MONTHS, even! It was so sweet without being OOC, and I loved Mugen's teasing. The ending was just great, too...::bows down to you:: WONDERFUL, beautiful, fantastic job! ;0) PLEASE write more fics in the future!

Wow, I've read thirty-eight Samurai Champloo fics out there (a majority of them MugenxFuu, even though there's a billion Samurai Champloo fics out there) and this is probably going to be the only one that'll be on my favorites list =P I like the simplicity of this ^^

PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE!

aw. i loved it. you should keep writing for chapters.

Beautiful and very fun to read. Short and sweet too, but I personally think you have enough talent to continue. The only thing I could say would be that since Mugen and Fuu are so open with eachother in this fic that you'd need to describe the scene and their inner thoughts more...don't be afraid to get into more explanations and meditations. Otherwise, excellent job and I hope to see more Mugen/Fuu fics from you! =D

SUPER KAWAII/CUTE! ^__^

Aw..that was so cute! I

*dreamy smile* kawaii... perfect Mugen and Fuu moment without becoming some overdramatic declration of love. I'm curious to know if you'll continue this...

I love it! Pleases write more soon!

i liked it even tho it was ooc just a bit

WOOT! Perfect. ^^ Good job friend. Keep it up.
-Kohaku

*sniffle sniffle* that was wonderful *sniffle* SO CUTE!

I would like to point out that this is my first Mugen/Fuu that I've read, and I'm glad that I chose this one to be my first ^.^ It was so wonderful, and picturing it when Fuu sat on Mugen's stomach makes me so happy.

I always did support this couple, but just never read one. Now maybe I'll become an obssesed freak like I am with Sesshomaru/Kikyou (anime Inuyasha in case you didn't know) But when I saw them walking together in the anime, I felt this strange thing, like it was meant to be, ya' know? I do that all the time when watching anime. Always get this strange feeling if they're a good pair or not...oops. I've been babbling so long so I guess I'll have to say bye!

This is good. I'm not sure if you were trying for a simple one shot or if you meant to comtinue, but I think you could go on for another chapter at least, should you feel the urge.