aw, this was just plain cute XD although anna WAS a bit cruel at times, it's something i'd kinda expect from her. Way to go :3

lol good story but is it over? it doesn't say completed...

wow!:D

oh-ohmygosh! i love it!

haha, nice. Brilliant work!

This may be old, but I love it. xD
Great story. You kept them well in their character.

i juz wanna drop by and say that i certainly loved your ficcie! hahahahaha you mad me laugh with all of yoh's imagination for the future! but then... how can yoh be doubtful when they were already sleeping together? its just cold feet ne? anyway! i loved it!

God bless your soul!
take care of yourself!
love yah
mwah mwah mwah

hahaha!! dis is so funny!! i luved da future thing wen he kept gettin older and anna was still as heartless as ever!!

what i dont get it what happened what did anna do or what did yoh do?e-mail me to answer my quesion

In the first few paragraphs there were some inconsistencies in tenses and some akward sentences.

Now here's the good part...your story was great! It was imaginative and funny! I really liked how you decided to word things and the amount of details you used(I could easily visualize the sequences). It also has the feel of reading a literary classic.

Wow, that was really good ^^ keep on writing! :D

I so want to mutilate Anna after that! >.< Christ. First she abuses him the entire time he was growing up, then she scares him to death by making him think she did something to herself, and she turns around on their wedding day and tells him it's not his kid! >.< -hates Anna more than ever, knowing Anna WOULD do that-

Anyway, other than that, it was an interesting story from Yoh's POV, though I wouldn't say this belongs in the Humor section. There were a number of grammar and spelling errors, but nothing that made the story hard to understand.

? Me lost...was it a joke? Or revenge? Anywayz. Pretty good! YxA, right? ^_^