/her husband’s stunned horror/

I can so imagine that. _

It was a nice little fic.

The is an amazing oneshot it'd be nice if you wrote a sequle though. Keep up the good work!

Ah, slash - when it's good, it's very very good, and when it's bad, it's... 15 yr old girls typing one-handed :P

This, however, is very good. Possibly too good to be read by a girl who blushes very easiy, in an open-plan office. I swear, I don't know what my fellow workmates must think of me as I alternaively laugh, cry and gasp while reading fanfic all day (what do you mean I should be doing work?)

But anyway, back on subject - I really liked this, the idea that Jack was just being taken along of the tide of events, Norrington's being at such a complete loss. All the character were lovingly painted - good stuff.

I really like you're style of writing, and I'd be really happy if you could find the time to drop by and review 'Maiden Voyage' one of these days. I'd like to know what you think...

Anyway, I'm off to read the kiss again :D