Nostalgic5947 2007-07-01 . chapter 1Heh, I liked the feel of this.
Somehow, I can see Krad thinking of butterflies (expecially one that, when you think about it, holds a color that sort of reprecents the Hikari--the blue) if he ever had the time.
Sadld, I can also see Krad sitting in a tree or just hovering in the canopy with a bunch of Morpho menelaus fluttering around him... God, that's pretty...
Yeah, very nice =) |
scrawling purple ink 2006-05-22 . chapter 1Wow. As usual, you delivered a oneshot with all sorts of comparisons that really make you think about things. That's really, really, beautiful. My only complaint is that while we all know it's Satoshi being compared the the butterfly, there isn't much mention of him. Even though you know it is. |
Daishi 2005-08-25 . chapter 1 Wow... that was very nicely written! ^^ |
Kyuseisha no Hikari 2005-08-25 . chapter 1I don't believe that I've yet reviewed to any of your stories, so let me apologize now. I just wanted to say here, that all of your works are in at least some way or form, truly breathtaking. Within them, each holds its own wonderful being, and I truly appreaciate all of the work you have put into them to give them their life. You have my many thanks and praise for so many stunning pieces of literature.
Sincerally, Kyuseisha no Hikari |
Timetill 2005-08-25 . chapter 1"Sometimes, the cost of immortality is death."
such a wonderful way to end a wonderful piece. beautifully done. |
WolfBane2 2005-08-25 . chapter 1(turns on the "Applause" soundtrack) Very good, very eloquent. I find it entertaining how Krad's POV (if well done) can twist anything irrational to make sense, or anything rational to be perfect nonsense. |
peach feet 2005-08-25 . chapter 1I'd say it was cute, but it isn't. It's gorgeous, more like. How'd you get the idea? |
Sage Kaley 2005-08-24 . chapter 1Argentine: You're crazy, I love you!
Sage: He's right, this was one of your 'deep thoughts' pieces that make us smile.
Kaley: And hurt my brain ;_;
Isis: Easy enough...
Sage: The last line gave me a bit of a shiver actually, "The cost of immortality is death" Very beautiful.
Isis: The whole piece was strange but lovely.
Argentine: ^^ It's Argentine approved.
Kaley: It still made me think too hard >_< It was great though.
Sage: One of your best yet ^^ |
Misoka Mine 2005-08-24 . chapter 1Wow. As usual, your story telling works wonders, but I loved the way you described Krad's liking for this certain butterfly.
But, the best part by far was the line "Sometimes the cost of immortality is death". I love it when a fanfic makes me thnik deeply, and this one certainly has. |
everwhite 2005-08-24 . chapter 1One word to describe your fic: beautiful |
SutekiKage 2005-08-24 . chapter 1O! ANOTHER GREAT AND VERY DEEP STORY BY NONE OTHER THEN YOU, Scribbles-chan ^^ (I would say your real name, but who knows...maybe there's someone crazy who will read this review...) anyways!! LOVED IT!! *Huggles* You never fail to make someone wonder ^^ |
Hakudoshi-chan 2005-08-24 . chapter 1interestingly interesting but cool |
Sage of Angst 2005-08-24 . chapter 1"For, you see, no matter how much he sins, no matter how old he gets, he will always remain beautiful. Art is eternal."
Beautiful, beautiful line. Beautiful ficlet, too, but I must say this part struck me most. Wonderful job! |