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ILuvFLUFFYmarshmellows
2008-07-23
ch 1, anon.
abusei read this on mediaminer
but i cant review it on there because of some type of problem
i almost cried at the ending
it was such a beautiful story
i promise you
i will favorite this
when i can figure what the hell is wrong with me computer
*beats up the monitor*
:D
im so glad she didnt die before giving birth to himiwari
it would have been a shame
and one more thing
i absolutely LOVED the little quotes after each chapter
they really went with it
and your little anecdote of the broken shoe was funny too
:D
-ILuvFLUFFYmarshmellows
CarpenterFan
2008-07-19
ch 10,
abuseYou did a wonderful job Yume, this is exactly how I would have wanted the show to continue, except for Fuu dying of course:( I enjoyed reading it to the very end, you are very talented, and I support the Jin/Fuu pairing:) This is the best Samurai Champloo fic I've read so far, and I look forward to more stories from you in the future, I'm sure you'll do an excellent job with them and thank you very much for taking the time to write all of this:) It was time well spent. 5 stars ^_^
WildFire759
2008-06-30
ch 10,
abuseThis last chapter was definitely bittersweet. The story reminded me a lot of the ending to Forrest Gump. I love that movie and I love your fanfic. Great work! Keep it up!
WildFire759
2008-06-30
ch 5,
abuseA very touching chapter. Got me choked up.
I especially like how you shift into present tense for certain scenes. I don't really know how to explain it, but it gave those parts a love-note feel to it, at least it did to me. I hope you understand my gibberish.
Anyways, I'll finish by saying that I love your fanfics. Keep up the great work!
Jester of Fools
2008-06-12
ch 10,
abuseOh God...I'm tearing up...breathe in breathe out, ok.

I never thought of myself as a Jin/Fuu fan, but you totally changed my mind-yay for you! Just...just bravo, I laughed,cried...laughed some more, your fic was like the best emotional roller coaster I've ever been on.

I'm happy I found this fic, and I plan on reading more of your work as well. Thank you for writing this beautiful piece of literature.

Ja ne!
Tori Shiroi
2008-06-03
ch 10,
abuseThank you for this wonderful bittersweet piece. I've been actually crying over it but the ending made me smile.
melancolie
2008-05-26
ch 10,
abuseWell, if you insist. ;P
This was an excellent story, purely awesome.
The characters managed to stay in character (for the most part. I'm not going to say it was perfect, but it was way better than I would have been able to do. xD). You portrayed their feelings perfectly, and despite the fact that it is now... 4:24 AM, I had to sit up all morning and read every chapter. It actually didn't take that long, but I had to keep getting up for food or the bathroom, or...
I'll stop boring you with my life story now. xD

Anyways, just thought I'd let you know that I absolutely loved this series and that, if you haven't already, you should probably look into becoming an author.
Seriously.
IVIaedhros
2008-05-25
ch 10,
abuseThis was extremely well written. Thank you for taking the time to make it excellent.
ladyecco
2008-05-12
ch 10,
abuseso so sad love lost and heart broken
Ken-Son4Hitokiri
2008-04-09
ch 5,
abusethis is a good story so far
KnockKnock313
2008-03-17
ch 10,
abuseso wonderful!! my favorite type of ending.
limemargaritas
2008-02-25
ch 10, anon.
abusewhat is this, the 5th? 6th? 7th? time ive read this story? :] it still managed to make me cry. thank you so much for your time and effort.
sulou
2008-02-13
ch 10,
abuseI stayed up all night reading and cried all the way through the last four chapters. What can I say, but that I savored every tragic moment right along with Jin and Fuu.

Thank you for sharing such a beautiful story.
Genesisgoboom
2008-02-09
ch 10,
abuseMan that was too sad! I Cry I tell you! *sniffs* but I have to say, that was a really great read!
Agent Hatake
2008-02-02
ch 5,
abuseThis is so sweet. It's cute that Jin doesn't realize that he's falling in love.

Oh! Have you heard on Youtube "Shiki No Uta - our rendition"? It's amazing that the singer could add so much soul to the song. I prefer that rendition than to Minmi's version. That's why I'm suggesting you should listen to it when you have free time.
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