Thank you for this story. I love it and I adore the pairing.Bravo

wah! This was such a beautiful story! I started it about 2 hours ago, and I just couldn't stop reading and read til the end! I love the way you detailed everything! Just a wonderful and amazing story! Gah, the ending made me tear up. I knew it was inevitable, but still. Great job! Keep up the good work w/both your fanfic and art! (I totally didn't even realize the penname til the end and was like...waah, that's the same person!)

That, was one of the most beautiful things I have read in a long, long while. And I read a lot...

This whole story is so bittersweet, and it ended so perfectly it nearly made me cry.

Thank you for making my day with this. You're an amazing writer.

- Gias Soul

T_T that was so lovely, really I love jin/fuu pairing and your fic was really great, hope you can write more jin/fuu! that good be great, please keep the good work and I also love your work on deviant, wish I could draw like that xD anyway ^^!
great work, I'm spechless :D!
adieu :3

waa~ really cool fic! haha! I cried, well not really cried.. tears just kept falling down to my face.. hahaha! at chapter 9. I really love that chapter. chapter 2 was good also. but as a whole this is really a good fic. very humane though a bit ooc but like you said 'they are in love'. hahaha! I love Jin/Fuu pairing a lot! I'm really impressed that you're the first one who wrote fics about them this good. Another, your story reminds me also of Rurouni Kenshin's Reminence Chapter OVA. hahaha! but you have your own way in your story it just that it keep lurking my mind. haha!

Well, you're amazing! I hope you do more great fics about them! ^_^

I am so completely amazed by this story. Thank you for writing it. I "lurked" back to the mediaminer site and found out that you wrote this so young...barely out of high school. Your writing style/plot techniques are much older, more evolved. And your emotional and sexual depth belies your years. I've never been a fan of "romance novels", but I just couldn't put this down. (so to speak) Thanks for a great read--

Well hello.

First...I'm from germany so please excuse my bad english! :D'

Second...I was seaching for (good) Jin/Fuu or Mugen/Fuu or Jin&Mugen/Fuu-Fanfics for a long time. I guess it was a kind of fluke that I reached you fic and I have to say: I definitly love it. I love your writing style, the way you mix the words together. It's really really good. So strong but so sensitive too. I mean, it's so amazing! *_* I'm flashed.
I was so sad, that Fuu still had to die in the end. I thought they (Jin and Fuu, maybe + Mugen) would be together forever. ;_; But well, there were enough hints that they wouldn't. I guess I like "happy-end"-Fics more, but sometimes I like bad-ends as well. ^_^ This one was very beautiful.

I really loved the love-scenes. They were always so beautiful, strong but sensitive. It was the most beautiful and saddest way to describe >love<. So awesome that I was moved. Thank you very much.

Well..I just response to the epilogue. I hope thats okay.

No matter how many times I re-read this story, I always end up crying in the end. Thanks for writing this piece of art.

Love this story!

i absolutely loved this fanfic! one of my all time favs perhaps. i enjoyed every bit of everything you wrote. one piece of art!
good job in writing this =]

very nicely done. nothing less from Youkai Yume; great artist and writer, boy am i jealous!! course it was ober depressing, it was awesome stuff.

This was a beautifully written story that was a lot of fun to read. And I guiltily admit, I bawled all the way through the final chapter. I really got tied up in the story, so the end sent me over the edge! (Bonus points for your Mugen. Wow.) I love you for this fic.

I thought it would be more suitable for her to have leukemia, as I remember at the age of 8 or 9 we had to do the story about Sadako Sasaki. She had been diagnosed leukemia, as a result of radiation from the atomic bombing in Hiroshima. She tried to make 10 paper cranes, after her best friend told the story about paper cranes. She fell short of her goal, before she died by making over 600.
Since then she and the crane has become a symbol of peace...

really well written. and very captivating. you are a talented writer.

Wow...just wow... To be honest I hadn't really expected much out of this story when I came across it seeing as how I'm a much bigger Mugen/Fuu fan, it was moreso morbid curiousty that caused me to actually read it. And God I'm SO glad I did, this is one of the best Samurai Champloo stories I've ever read! True, I'm usually not a fan of stories where one of the main characters dies, and as I was reading I was praying the whole time that something would save her but now that I'm to the end, I'm really glad that she did pass away; because if she was dying of heart cancer, realistically at that time there would have been no way to save her. I know its been like 3 years since you've had anything to do with this story but I just wanted to personally thank you for publishing it, you should be very proud of your writing skills. :)