God, I know this is an old story, but I consider myself so lucky to have found it - great piece of work! :D

great story.the evil eye is a great idea.you should writ more and use that idea.

Very cute. You had me on the edge of my seat! I was wondering if you were going to go a bit further with the evil eye because it was a really unique concept. I would have liked to see it come back for Jerrie during the climactic battle with Zeus or maybe Teazer could have gotten it. Since they are twins... it would have been possible they shared it. Sort of like a Coricopat and Tantomile thing. But anyway, I loved your story. Very well written. Can't wait to see if you come out with more!

I love it. even though i prefer to think of them as mates... it still is a good story. ^_^

Ahem, I tried to read as much as i could, and what i read was good, but you're chapters are REALLY long. The idea was good though, and sometimes I got lost in the cockney accents.

Hmm, this is interesting and very well-written. I just wish they wre mates not siblings in the story...sigh. Sorry, I can hardly stand to read stuff where Mungo and Rumpel are siblings, but it's still good. THe only thing was that all the action seemed to happen pretty fast...also you might want to make your chapters a bit shorter, so they're more readable. :)