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| jordan 2008-06-11 ch 7, anon. | abuseheyy! omg this is a great story! i think you should keep going with it! |
| Michi Mouse 2008-03-22 ch 7,  | abuseWow, I love your story! It takes a lot to creep me out, and let me tell you, this is pretty freaky. When Steve was stabbed in the thigh ... *shudder*. Very good chapter! Update soon please =) |
| Charcoal 2008-03-22 ch 7, anon. | abusethat was AWESOME! |
| brookeblue 2008-03-22 ch 7, | abuseHow dare you stop there?! |
| brookeblue 2008-03-22 ch 6, | abuseOhh, please don't kill of Sodapop! I'll die if you do! I was scared when that girl was killed. I was frightened when Angela found her dead beau... NOW I'm terrified. |
| brookeblue 2008-03-22 ch 4, | abuseGod, now my heart's racing again. Great! Except, this is the 60's... Cells phone weren't around yet. Or did I miss a disclaimer that says it takes place in '08? Still creepy. |
| brookeblue 2008-03-22 ch 3, | abuseOh my god. How dare you scare me like that?! Tres' great. |
| brookeblue 2008-03-22 ch 2, | abuseOk. I lied. I just finished the second chapter. I'm scared. But... I can't stop... Now I'm scared for Two-Bit! Yet... so curious it's not even funny. |
| brookeblue 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseWow, I wasn't sure about this at first but I think it's really good! I'm actually kind of breathing heavy. I'm not sure if I'll read more because I'm scared kind of easily but I might read more later. I liked this! |
| Greaser Girl 4 Life 2007-08-31 ch 6, | abuseOMG...it's called updating and that's what I want you to do...please! |
| Greaser Girl 4 Life 2007-08-31 ch 3, | abuseOh Two-Bit, you dummy. Update soon. this is cool. |
| The-Wicked-Have-More-Fun 2007-08-27 ch 6, | abuse^^ Welcome back, yay! You said you were rsuty with writing? This chapter is great! Nice and suspenseful. My only cqutique is your grammer. You didn't add question marks at the end of some questions and near the end you didn't add in periods all together. But other than that, very, very good! |
| fantoallwritertonone 2007-05-16 ch 5, | abusethis is awsome write more |
| Angel the original 2007-04-23 ch 5, | abuseUPDATE ASAP interesting story very suspensful but you need to update! |
| S.B. 2007-04-08 ch 5, anon. | abusedude, you've gotta update super fast! it's so exciting. I hope you update as soon as your grandpa gets better...if he does, but don't lose hope. |