*Gapes* How talented you are...it's incredible. You told this one-shot amazingly well, and I could just see everything playing out. It was depressing yes, but a very fitting portrayal of their ever-complicated relationship. They fit each other so well...

I can't wait to read more of your work.

~Lex

Ah. Long time no see. Just this wandering one here.

Well. A tribute to another writer, eh. Whatever the case, this wandering one did indeed detect that bitter feeling in the mood. Poor Rin. Unloved by her lord and used by him too. Tut tut. That is quite a shame. Oh well.

This wandering Random Reader shall continue his journey through the lands that are this site. Do not worry. The stories that this wandering one hears will always keep me company. Perhaps our paths will meet again...

Random Reader
Fanfiction Land Wanderer

All i have to say is wow. I love this story. I am not usually a fan of first person narratives but this was awesome. Continue please.

Oh my God. That was so good. I usually don't like Rin/Shessy in the fedual times but that story was good.