Beautiful. The descriptions were vivid enough to come to life, yet avoided being tiresomely lengthy. The inherent poetry of your story shines through very clearly. Very, very romantic (and not merely in the "love" sense of the word, too...).

Even though this is one of the strangest pairings I have ever seen, and "Garaa" is actually meant to be spelled "Gaara", plus it's now very much an AU story (if you haven't read the manga then I won't spoil it for you). But these are trifling flaws in an otherwise well-crafted tale. In fact, the very fact that I was compelled to read it to the finish DESPITE the flaws only serves to showcase how excellent this fic is.

Simply wonderful. I hope to see more of your stories soon. Too bad about the comp.